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Damn, that is proper size of chapter for your story.
Talk about having your life turned around from bad to good. It's probably going to take a while before Chryssie actually manages to fully process that her hardships are over. For now. anyway. Who knows what the future holds?
Also, the bit with the caribou chieftain, was that a reference to Fall of Equestria, only without the misogynistic domination/humiliation/mutilation/mindbreak porn?
If so, I'm going to assume Ares and company will obliterate the bastards.
Yeah, I'm not a fan of FoE, what gave it away? /snark
oh my, chryssie stands a legitimate chance at getting fat in that household.
6690623 Did you also notice the cameo? Queen Lestidae of the shadow temple hive? If only Queen Pandinus was mentioned.
As I understand other mane6 are dead?
I didn't expected Chrysalis to join the herd, but even so the sex was good and the politics behind it, along with Chrysalis' strong case of culture shock, were entertaining. Question, will we find out what group thought it was a brilliant idea to kill Discord and if they were punished?
I am really loving this series, the stetting, the sex and the character of Ares are all brilliant.
amazing chapter
i thought this story was dead
The harem grows, and who better to fill the position (in all its forms ) than Ms.Cheese legs herself
6690790 ...Oh yeah, I knew that name felt familiar. I'd kind of forgotten about her after she tried to confront Pandinus and got owned.
she strikes again, poor Chrissy.
Yay! Chryssi gets some love. A bit too much, it seems.
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They would be around 150 something at this point.
Assuming they survived the onslaught that ruined Equestria.
And the grueling Exodus that followed.
Without an alicorn to mooch longevity off of, they would likely make Granny Smith look young.
Dead or Retirement home at this point.
The description is such an amazing idea for a story . . .
and instead of actually writing something good with that fantastic idea, you made this. This is disappointing. Why would you go to the trouble of creating such an amazing concept just to waste it by creating smut?
This is even more disappointing that seeing myself in the mirror.
At least you warned me in the description.
Hah! Lestidae lives yet again! Granted in another universe but all the same.
For some reason in my mind (Granted this may be due to the way Changelings are described in The Substitute Demon) but with Chrysalis having been out in the wild for so long, I pictured her to be more feral than she was during the Canterlot invasion.
6692512 I've actually planned to use this idea in full later; once I finish Substitute it will be a toss up between this and Magic's Shadow. That being said, I did start with the throne scene, but I hate stories where things happen just because. I needed more, so I ended up thinking for about a week on this. It started taking shape, and soon I had an entire AU that came about just from the phrase "Celestia, you can kiss my balls." You're not the first to cite disbelief at this idea being spawned while just writing smut, but rest assured it will likely be expanded to a full story, or at least Ares' backstory will. That being said, would you rather read a clop with both definitions of plot, or just mindless smut? I've tried reading the latter, and I don't care for it. If I don't even like it, why would I write it?
6690550 I know, it was supposed to be a simple thing, then it just kept growing
6690623 FoE are good for smut, but that's about it. It's hard to imagine that actually working in any real capacity. I think other races, many being female-dominant on the planet, would notice the caribou lord and his ways a bit earlier than 'hey, they're on our doorstep, and they said they're here for the poon.' Anyway, I just like the idea of there being actual caribou, and whether or not their aggressive isn't important. I just wanted a bad guy there, and they were the first to come to mind. P.S. Dropbear did a good FoE, or at least I thought it was good. Not much in the way of smut, but he was more going for the "Keel them ded" route. I don't think he likes them either
Wait, an update? On the day I happen to remember this story and decide to check it out again... Serendipity reigns supreme.
6690790 I'm sure you also noticed the town Ares' was moving the refugees through
6690766 pudgy 'lings are best lings, those chitin plates end up being comically useless as they shift around on their frame.
6690806 I see that as a lone pony doing a it of research, maybe finding the support of a few others to get the materials, and going out on a crusade.
6690797 Heavens no, slowing down due to old age is a good possibility, though I can see a skeletal Pinkie still pronking about, handing out cupcakes to the shock and horror of those around her. Shining is about 130-150 in this, and I think he's about 10-15 years their senior.
6690871 Arrow, the television series? If it is one, it was unintentional. If you read Substitute, you'll know this happens some times
6691165 fixed XD
6691454 It's not so much I couldn't get away with it, as I don't want to do it. I hate reading it, and I refuse to put my readers through something I can't stand. Hypocrisy is something I try to avoid.
6692650 Feral Chrysalis: First off, most of my stories are AU to each other, meaning nothing is guaranteed to carry over. Second, I said she had will to live. In any survivor scenario, your will to live is key. If you give up, there's a very good chance you will die quickly to things that most other people could survive. Also, as it was said here, Chrysalis attack Canterlot with an actual hive, not just a bunch of mindless drones as it was in Substitute.
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Than another question. Why a human tag is here? Did Ares is ex-human? If yes, then would you tell how he became a pony?
6693419 It was alluded to in the first chapter. First was the fact that Celestia found him covered in blood in weird armor and he couldn't walk straight. Second was the set of armor he kept in his throne room. It was hundreds of years before this though, so about 2-300 years after Luna's banishment, while most of this happens, I'd go with about 5-10 years after the events of the 1000's Sun Celebration.
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Fair enough, I can respect not wishing to be a hypocrite and actually fleshing out the scenario.
With your stories being of different universes, I do understand this. Some of your other work left a sort of "taste" if you will to how I view certain elements taking place. While in no way am I under any illusions that good old "Tuna" is going to show or anything of the sort, the way you depict how your changelings are feral in some of your other work gave me more of a premise or mental image of sorts that allowed me to flesh out an idea and perceive things in a more complete manner.
6693528 Why are you licking your computer screen? Not hating, just curious
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I can lick my screen if I want. Your not my real dad! I regret nothing!
6693370 Eh, maybe I've just had bad luck, but every FoE that I've found that isn't an anti-FoE delves pretty deep into violent, hyper-dominating misogynistic rape-sex that makes me damn uncomfortable to read. The near-ritualistic crippling via maiming that is common to that 'verse doesn't make it any easier to swallow either, especially when it is implied they basically take bonesaws and start hacking off wings and horns without even basic anesthesia.
...Yeah, I think I started ranting a bit there. Sorry 'bout that.
I do like the idea of caribou being a thing, though. Personally I imagine them inhabiting some of the colder regions of the world, basically the Alaska, Scandinavian or Russian-equivalent area/s of the MLP world, with a culture similar to Vikings or the Sami people.
6693693 Can't say I've read too many FoE stories. Most were anti-FoE, so I never really got hit by that level of mutilation and bad-stuff.
6693702 That's a good thing, trust me on that.
6693370 I can't wait to see it.
6693486 before I read this is this a story were a human gets turned into a pony??
6696735 Yea, about 600 years before the story takes place.
6697004 thanks but i am going to pass
6697227 Not for everyone, hence the tags. Most of mine have humans in them one way or another. Well, except for The Shortest Challenge. That one's all Tia vs. Nightmare.
One reason I really like this story is that it is more believable than the more common and more extreme FOE. Here the situation is somewhat realistic as the Royal Sisters cope in a world where they are no longer needed and while their benefactor is a ruthlessly cunning and magnificent bastard he's more of an anti hero in the same vein as Doctor Doom. He's obviously morally ambiguous but you feel the world would be better in his capable hand/hooves. Celestia's "act" of submission was more for the sake of vengeance than any sexual desire. Based on what I have read I feel like Ares is just what the world needs. He's created an egalitarian hegemony with him and the other Alicorns at the top but the fact that the others races serve him willingly and are all treated equally makes him in the way of an effective competent benevolent dictator.
6698591 Thanks for the full review of the character. I enjoy most reviews and try to read them all, but reviews like these have a special place in my heart. Good or bad, I like it when someone actually says what they do/don't like about the setting/characters.
6700262 No problem, credit where it is due. Hope you do more updates or even a prequel where you explain Ares' background, his rise to power and his ascension.
6858130 No matter how hard you ship Ares with Twilight, It's not going to happen =P she's too adorkable for me to use that way.
6802164 It's a possibility, but I'd need a decent scenario for that. In the case of this latest chapter, I had a Celestia that's dealing with depression, and I know a few people who eat when they're upset. Hence the term comfort food, and I love donuts. Next thing I know, presto. Instant kink with pastries, probably sun butt's favorite kind of kink. The type she can eat. That being said, there's plenty of things that could have happened between Revenge, and Queen's Gambit. Maybe a certain princess complaining about being sore and swollen? I think I may have something now, actually...
6858669 That's tame? granted, I didn't go into stuffing (which had occurred to me), but still.
Ya know, I have a question:
Who exactly is getting Cadance pregnant? This story goes to great pains to establish that Ares is the first/only viable alicorn male, so Shining was made capable somehow?
Shining: *sigh* I understand you want foals, but I am not comfortable with letting that stallion touch you.
Cadance: Actually, Twily says she found a solution.
Twilight: Its a fairly powerful spell that will make you compatible.
Shining: Great. Well I'm all for it. *Stands at ready*
Twilight: uhhhhhhhhhh Turn around and raise your tale
Shining: What?
Twilight: I have to cast it directly on your prostate.
or does Cadance play by different rules for some arbitrary reason?
I just randomly had this thought. if you answered somewhere, then please excuse my poor reading comprehension skills.
Aww yeah, Chryssie is here. And talk about her life getting turned on its head in a good way.
Hah, I always liked the idea of her actually having no real experience in sex beyond sacking out love, makes for amusing scenes.
Always happy to see when good stuff happens to her. Only problem, she might get fat.
As a side note, is it also in your canon that when love is directed straight at an undisguised changeling, it's much more potent than when drawn by force or obtained by disguising as someone else?
Is Queen Pulmonus going to kill Queen Chrysalis?
NO.
was it that third one that rocked the boat?
I just kept thinking during this chapter; "Man, this is so much like The Substitute Demon." Then I had a 'wait a minute...' moment and realized you were the same author. It was pretty mind blowing.
Love the story. I almost wish this was a slice of life instead of a clop; your plot is strong enough without the smut. Still, it's good either way.
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Dear god how old do ponies live fore in your world though that would explane granny smith.
Author, you haven't failed this story.
(Since you unintentionally titled an Arrow reference, I give one right back.)
7391455 Bruh.....