Equestria is broken, damaged beyond all repair. Maybe. But sometimes, a little dirt and goo can piece it back together. Just with a new... sheen to things.
I liked it, but I kind of wish Cadance asked to be referred to as such outside of bed. Dominance is all well and good, but actual friendship leaves for more possibilities.
Hrm... You know, all this interlude needs is to start with "Dear Playcolt"
I enjoyed it very very much though.
Also: new Filly Scout game. Cum tag. Magic item randomly picks who is 'it' and that pony gets a dick. The 'it' pony gets to cum once, and then it picks another random player; if they came inside somepony, that pony is out. Whoever the last pony unfilled is gets to keep the magic item for the week and is more or less in charge anytime they're having sex amongst themselves. Once the scouts include sissy colts, they have restrictive rings to wear if they aren't 'it' and the magic item removes them and gives them a size upgrade... if they need it.
If the scout's win is particularly impressive, they might even get a chance to top the Scoutmaster
6891530 (third edit...) Sorry.... but yeah I meant it as, why did he do it aside from 'disagreements' and utter... 'distaste' for each other. It would be interesting to know their story as much as a 'side story' as it would be honestly, and more of all i just want a good excuse to see glamour shot, (who i foresee abusing power) get a righteous amount of 'punishment' but that should be secondary to the main plot, just idle fancies and how much of a attractive character(s) Granite (and the girls) are.
(sorry about my earlier comments i, find it hard to explain or use proper words sometimes in a effort to sound less serious or mean, and i feel i did come off wrong before.)
The last part reminded me of Star Wars.. Kylo Ren throwing a fit. Anyway, you are my favorite writer for smut, with this story alone. It is at least on the same level as Titty Sparkle's writing and I am really looking forward on how this thing progresses.
To be honest, I'd really quite enjoy a future scene with all of those filly scouts sporting buns in the oven and new ones being filled.
Granite you lucky lucky stallion...
I liked it, but I kind of wish Cadance asked to be referred to as such outside of bed. Dominance is all well and good, but actual friendship leaves for more possibilities.
I liked thus... am i a bad pony?
And I would love to see how and why he put that Dildo there!
Hrm... You know, all this interlude needs is to start with "Dear Playcolt"
I enjoyed it very very much though.
Also: new Filly Scout game. Cum tag. Magic item randomly picks who is 'it' and that pony gets a dick. The 'it' pony gets to cum once, and then it picks another random player; if they came inside somepony, that pony is out. Whoever the last pony unfilled is gets to keep the magic item for the week and is more or less in charge anytime they're having sex amongst themselves. Once the scouts include sissy colts, they have restrictive rings to wear if they aren't 'it' and the magic item removes them and gives them a size upgrade... if they need it.
If the scout's win is particularly impressive, they might even get a chance to top the Scoutmaster
Just an amusing idea I had.
While I am enjoying this interlude, are we getting back to the main plot soon? (Pun not intended).
Now I am very curious as to what will happen when colts join the mares ;)
That scene really felt long and solid, great job with this chapter and no puns were ever intended
Will the bonus scene involve him placing it where Glamour shot can find it?
Am I the only one in the comments who realize that Firebrand was the one who stuck that dildo where Glamor could find it?
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maybe
Different dildos
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Next chapter
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A lot of sex
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No, it will involve Granite humping away on it
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6891530 Aww... Then who placed it?
Couldn't have been Granit... must've been one of the Girls or possibly Cadence.
6891530 (third edit...) Sorry.... but yeah I meant it as, why did he do it aside from 'disagreements' and utter... 'distaste' for each other. It would be interesting to know their story as much as a 'side story' as it would be honestly, and more of all i just want a good excuse to see glamour shot, (who i foresee abusing power) get a righteous amount of 'punishment' but that should be secondary to the main plot, just idle fancies and how much of a attractive character(s) Granite (and the girls) are.
(sorry about my earlier comments i, find it hard to explain or use proper words sometimes in a effort to sound less serious or mean, and i feel i did come off wrong before.)
So, is Glamour Shot the Equestrian version of Kylo Ren?
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Of course ;)
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I will second and third the cum tag idea!
Keep up the great work.
The last part reminded me of Star Wars.. Kylo Ren throwing a fit. Anyway, you are my favorite writer for smut, with this story alone. It is at least on the same level as Titty Sparkle's writing and I am really looking forward on how this thing progresses.
Moar please
I ADORE this story! I simply cannot wait for more!
THIS!!! Was so hot, so amazing, entrancing, alluring AAARGH.
Plz update
Results of reading this in one day: i came 6 times. Gj.
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It's coming, I swear! ^_^
The opening months of 2016 have put us all in a bit of a grinder. Working through it, and hope to be back on track very soon.
Thanks for your patience and support. It is very appreciated!
Beware of the flying dildos! The high velocity and penetration projectile pokers!