Equestria is broken, damaged beyond all repair. Maybe. But sometimes, a little dirt and goo can piece it back together. Just with a new... sheen to things.
7183278 I, for one, greatly appreciate an absolutely enthralling plot like this. I'd probably be fine with no sex scenes at all; this is really good. This might be one of my new favorites if you can write the clop in well enough with the story; I find that tends to be one of the biggest sticking points in stories like these.
This was great. Please sirs, can I have another?
A good chapter. I really like the character interaction you write. Good work. Give yourself a cookie.
...MORE!
where is the porn
Might not have had hot demon porn, but deep, well written character development will have to do
7182751 7182842 Oh, there'll be plenty of that before you know it.
7183278 I, for one, greatly appreciate an absolutely enthralling plot like this. I'd probably be fine with no sex scenes at all; this is really good. This might be one of my new favorites if you can write the clop in well enough with the story; I find that tends to be one of the biggest sticking points in stories like these.
7188790 Yeah, me, too.
And yeah, it is. Probably because of that very thing.
And you're SO right there.
Absolutely amazing work!
Extremely well done.
Probably when you believed that everyone followed your philosophy to the letter and allowed your naivete to cloud your judgement!