Equestria is broken, damaged beyond all repair. Maybe. But sometimes, a little dirt and goo can piece it back together. Just with a new... sheen to things.
I'm confused? Are the kids being brainwashed? Because this seems like a Dead Poets Society thing, only with sex instead of poetry. If it's the later, than this is far less creepy than I thought.
You know, the first chapter looks like what happened in the past was a fairly straight scenario. That the Nobles were racist and wanted power and blah blah blah.
But one thing seems out of place in this, and that's that the nameless Archmage was apparently ready to die just to defeat Cadance and the Elements of Harmony.
Now I'm not saying they were the bad guys and he good, but it's a bit unusual for a villain to go this far unless things are personal or he's bought into some kind of ideology. I would really like to know which one it was.
so were is the transformation?
The brainwashing is kind of making me uneasy, but I'll keep an eye on this all the same.
6140137 Yeppers! Believe me, there will be much more transformation as time goes on.
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Bah, that's the best part.
I'm confused? Are the kids being brainwashed? Because this seems like a Dead Poets Society thing, only with sex instead of poetry. If it's the later, than this is far less creepy than I thought.
6140438 A little bit. With Rarity, yes. But for alot of them, it's a "stripped of inhibitions" style corruption.
Nice story so far.
You know, the first chapter looks like what happened in the past was a fairly straight scenario. That the Nobles were racist and wanted power and blah blah blah.
But one thing seems out of place in this, and that's that the nameless Archmage was apparently ready to die just to defeat Cadance and the Elements of Harmony.
Now I'm not saying they were the bad guys and he good, but it's a bit unusual for a villain to go this far unless things are personal or he's bought into some kind of ideology. I would really like to know which one it was.
were do you get that cover art from?
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Well Intentioned Extremist... or maybe he was just conned. Or well... it's not like there aren't bigot martyrs in real life...
Oh right, the rest of the story. Fucking. Hot. Been waiting for a 'fun corruption' story like this.
6143410 Even more disturbing, I'm afraid. And thanks! I'm having a ton of fun with this story!