Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
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Well. That happened.
The foreshadowing was plentiful, but the manner in which you did it . . . amazing.
Onward, my dear author, onward!
The blade curse most likely has effected Rainbow as well. Considering it was stuck in her chest. I'll wager Celestia was really pleased with this outcome.
... I don't know about anyone else, but holy shit that was an intense fight scene for me x3
This story was surprisingly good, I only saw it because I was looking for stories with Octavia. Can't wait for the next chapter. Definitely deserves more attention!
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Glad you're enjoying it so much. I think its size intimidates people, though... plus the tags and my reputation for not pulling any punches.
I'm a bit confused as to what just happened? Did Rainbow take the knife and kill LD? Or did LD kill herself?