Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
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Yeah, haven't read the other two books, so I'm starting here. I love this so far. Should make reading the other ones much more interesting.
Only one more chapter left? I guess we aren't going to see his perspective during the entire Trixie v.s Equestria story. Oh darn I really was hoping to read what went through his mind with all his encounters with Trixie.
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Well now, there's a cute set of tentacles I've not seen in a while.
This chapter was a little difficult to follow, truth be told. And I'm still curious as to why Princess would blatantly tell Fine such a precious secret. I was always under the impression that he'd figured it out himself.
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If you had trouble following it, imagine the trouble Fine had. In other words, that's the whole point.
And what do you mean, curious? Celestia and Fine have all but spelled it out: Celestia wanted to heighten his hatred for her so that he'd work even harder to try and defeat her. It makes the game more interesting. Celestia wants an enemy to toy with, and she's created one in Fine. That's the whole point of the first six chapters of the story! What better way to do that than to make him aware of just how evil she really is?
Besides, every villain wants someone to gloat to.
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I suppose that I can't argue since the first two chapters of Dismay are intended to leave the reader more confused than a blind lesbian at a fish market.
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Wow. I'm really not sure what image I'm supposed to get out of that.
well I guess the simplest answer was the correct one: shes just sadistic. Shes just the badlestia in celestia, thats it. Its just a game. Well that and shes averse to death, but thats every dictator's M.O. .
Oh...okay I was not expecting that despite how fucked up this story can seem with it's beautiful literary work.