This have so much potential please continue

I want to see what would happen to someone driving. The only thing is, I don't think the cars stayed with us when everyone left.

I like this.

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>>Moon_Fire
I've actually started on my next chapter and it should be finished soon.

>>SPleedude
Ironically enough, that is one of the things on my list so you can look forward to that.

>>gamerj14
Thanks for saying so, and I shall continue.

logically if planes and subways stayed then other former of transport stayed. the one I ponder is what if anything happened to normal equines

6060984 Someone changes into a pony when tightrope walking...

I'd like to see a diver, just to throw out an odd one.

Oh, and not a sea or mere-pony, otherwise there won't be much tension, now will there?

6062076 You're absolutely right. I added that dream for the sole purpose of getting the story approved and only that reason. You won't see anything like that in later chapters.

6062081 Hmmm, I might be able to do something like that, but if I don't do it right it'll end up being the shortest chapter so far. But I'll look into this idea.

Worst case scenario
Chapter 3: "Then he drowned." The End

Oooh, interesting chapter. I think this is the first side story to have a character transformed into a different sex. Not impossible; glad to see someone going for something new. I do wonder about the internal logic of this convict writing their experiences like this, but... I guess it doesn't always matter.

Being a new gender is going to take some getting use to.

Well, you've got the grammar down pat.

I wouldn't mind reading more about this character.
if you think about gving this chap a series,
you already have someone wanting to read it :3

6113236 I've been considering doing sequels to some of these chapters and when I finally run out of scenarios to use for this story, I might make a new story to explore what the characters are doing in more detail. I'm not very good at doing full length stories though....

The sharp teeth and bat wings I now have make me thing so but I can't say for sure until I try in the future.

The sharp teeth and bat wings I now have make me think so, but I can't say for sure until I try in the future.

(Well, more then usual.)

(Well, more than usual.)