We always see these people-turned-pony dealing with their appocalyptic situations in the relative comfort of their own homes/bases...but what if you're not at home when all of humanity disappears and you're left as a cute little pony in a bad place.
I REALLY hope the explanation offered in that dream sequence turns out to be wrong, because otherwise this whole setting just went from new, fresh and exciting...
To a freaking Conversion Bureau rip-off with a few 'technical' glitches in the 'turn everybody to ponies' plan. And that would not be a good thing.
That, and why does this dude get so much of the terminology right? Equestria. Cutie marks. Hell, it's not that inconceivable that somebody might not even know what the proper name for a pegasus is.
Other than that, it was a good intro sequence, even if the escape felt just a bit to easy and smooth. Guess that's due to the post-scrip recording framing device, but still felt like it should have taken more effort then this.
Agree with LordofDarkness about him getting all the MLP terminolgy right off the bat.
This would be more interesting if we could've inferred this guy might be Rainbow CrDash's ancient ancestor from digging himself out of the crater when he finally landed (outside the plane, of course)
Interesting sadly he isn't probably the only person so impacted, not to mention the danger of planes falling out of the air
I REALLY hope the explanation offered in that dream sequence turns out to be wrong, because otherwise this whole setting just went from new, fresh and exciting...
To a freaking Conversion Bureau rip-off with a few 'technical' glitches in the 'turn everybody to ponies' plan. And that would not be a good thing.
That, and why does this dude get so much of the terminology right? Equestria. Cutie marks. Hell, it's not that inconceivable that somebody might not even know what the proper name for a pegasus is.
Other than that, it was a good intro sequence, even if the escape felt just a bit to easy and smooth. Guess that's due to the post-scrip recording framing device, but still felt like it should have taken more effort then this.
Our of curiosity, is this the same Max as in The First Unicorn on Earth?
6061317 The last chapter of the story that spawned this...
And your comment gets a whole lot of new genius.
your first story? whoa you did a good job on it!
6112536 Thank you~! I think I'm improving as I continue making these chapters though, I hope you enjoy the rest of them too.
Agree with LordofDarkness about him getting all the MLP terminolgy right off the bat.
This would be more interesting if we could've inferred this guy might be Rainbow
CrDash's ancient ancestor from digging himself out of the crater when he finally landed (outside the plane, of course)But over all, I liked it.