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So william got Celestia's essence... When will he start controlling the earth's rotation? or Solar beams, nothing couldn't go wrong with a beam of pure heat lancing through a tank or a helicopter. He needs to protect his little ponies.
I really like this story and where this is going
I think that William and Cindy are become some sort of hive mind/alicorn/alpha thingy
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5987214 William has some growing to do before he can consider such extravagant means of destruction. He's currently delighted that he can cook frozen dinners. He's learning though! Being able to guide the other ponies is a pretty potent ability.
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you are close but not thinking right remember William has too heads the question should be witch too princess will he be turning in two.?
I am thinking you are right with celestia's essence if I hade to guess with the caring and love the second will be Cadance.
but that is all a guess as this story is way to young to even try to make a guess like this.
Harts Fire
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"which two" and "in to" harts fire.
I suspected Candance from the pink but Celestia's mortal self is also pink, see Principal Celestia.
Granted that EG is AU and thus can be doubted, he's got more Celly than Candy.
Though Cindy comes quite close to Selene, yeah, we're just making random connections without basis.
This so far is interesting but I have to wonder how strong will William's final form will be and if he will be a mix of stallion and mare. I guess we will see in due time.
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organs apples
Huh. Telepathic, bicephalic alicorn tactician. The queen of the swarm, as it were. As far as equinoid mutations go, William got the jackpot.
Also, this is some of the grossest yet most engrossing biological warfare I've ever seen. Nauseated kudos.
As for Diane, she is almost certainly not getting out of this human. Heck, William and Cindy might be able to infect her just by thinking at her.
Will managed to stuff two typos in the knapsack:
Unless this is a particularly significant Knocking, I don't think it should be capitalized.
His. Lone Wing may have been Susan once, but he is now emphatically male.
Diane seems like an interesting character. Takes quite the backbone to stand your ground and negotiate with creatures that just broke your door down like that.
Think she's got a snowball's chance in hell of getting out of this without joining the herd, though. William alone in that close proximity is probably enough, and that's without stuff like trading (almost guaranteed) tainted food, and that 'funny tasting' water she's already been drinking.
Hm, so due to the unique strand of the mutation he received, William is not only resistant to the mutations, but he is also compatible with all of them. Therefore he is constantly mutating at a fluctuating rate? With no clear ending form in sight? It does appear as though he has gained a sort of hive mind type influence over the ponies.
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Hey, it's hardly Sandra's fault that everything she handles now is with her infectious tongue-tentacles. And she's well hydrated too.
I'm pretty sure all the food they have is prepackaged and canned though. It's a little soon (how many days since day zero? 3? 4?) for pony grown food to make an appearance, and considering the setting, I wouldn't be surprised if such things had weird features too, resembling stuff more from Fallout universe. The Void changes many things after all.
I can't help but wonder if all the pony essences have an analog though to Equestria. That is, from specific ponies. If that is the case, wouldn't there be a Luna analog if William was the Celestia or Cadance one?
the only way William will be able to keep his ponys safe is to shared the gif, time for some biological warfare
5987375 Typos have been turned over to the army for proper disposal.
I can imagine a person going around this world killing ponies in the hopes it will free their soul.
A grim reaper, if you like.
Argh, this story gets me all conflicted. On one hand it's sexy to watch all of this zerg-style mutation/mind-altering, and I want to witness William become Overmind of the Newâ„¢ ManPonyKind. On the other hand, I'm human, and have quite a lot of allegiance to humanity, and want to root for their survival too. Hopefully William's power over the Equine Swarm will allow him to reconcile both sides at some point.
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Given the pink horn, I figured he actually had Cadence's essence.
Fitting, given the whole 'love' thing.
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L I V E F O R T H E S W A R M.
I see Sandra is now a proper Tatzlpony, minus the eye markings. Yes~ I can't help but wonder when this is all over if Earth will resemble a quite twisted version of Equestria, with many aspects of ideas and shapes from The Void.
At us? To us?
Either way, based on this and each of the clop scenes thus far, I'm getting the impression that stallions are submissive, and the mares dominate, in a herd.
Not 'I'm in your head', but I'm your head. Quite a powerful statement.
I'm reminded of corruption stories where instead of outright mind control, the corrupter goes to great length to have the corrupted change their own minds, come to their own conclusions, embrace the corruption themselves rather than be forced into it. While I don't think that's what is going on here (I think Cindy is quite genuine), I still am reminded of it.
I can't help but wonder what Cindy actually is: Is she truly a part of William with some outside knowledge, or is she a mixture of that and something from The Void Between Realities. Either way, I felt she was rather quiet through most of this chapter, considering she is his second half now. Wonder what the future will bring as they grow 'closer' together, will they finish each other's sentences? Speak in unison at points for emphasis? Be a two man comedy act in one body? I think she's one of the things I'm enjoying most about the bizarre transformation. A commenter in the know.
In the earlier dream scene, William wasn't just observing, but he was experiencing the herd alpha's experiences, as well as experiencing all the other ponies a little less vividly. The desire to spread the gift, the scent of uninfected humans, emotions, pain, and their thoughts as well. Taken together, that's quite a powerful ability he is coming into.
I also can't help but wonder what kind of kinkiness can result from that ability being more developed as well.
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Honestly, I think the only real good compromise is where William gains power over the infection, such that he can freeze the transformation (or alter it at will). That way, the remaining infected humans that haven't turned yet would still be under his sway if he wished, but wouldn't change and could safely interact with ponies.
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5987971 William has a powerful choice to make, and could lead this in two very different directions. Will he lead his ponies to battle, or seek peace, or even just try to run away entirely?
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I'm under the impression that no matter what William does, unless his power extends to every infected on the planet, it'll just be a local stalemate at best, while other pockets will continue to spread the infection.
Running away is just a holding action, really. I foresee attempts to wipe out 'the infection' so long as humanity exists and believe that path is the correct one. The only reason I see that wouldn't happen is if humanity was beaten back to the point where they could no longer field such actions, by other pockets of infected.
That leaves diplomacy, and diplomacy without power backing it up isn't worth anything. So fighting will happen I believe, the question is, what is the goal? The complete turning or subjugation of the human race? Or just getting them to back off hostile actions, opening a dialogue and willing to make compromises and plans that don't end with "and nuke them"?
(That said, if a peaceful outcome is possible, that'd be much preferred)
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I have to agree. I like me some ponification, but I would still vastly prefer that humanity comes out strong in the end.
don't forget that the infected are not just all adults their also infected children running out there, put that dark tag to work and add some feels... there is a ton of stuff you can add to this story it's not even funny
Soooo... The ponies attempt to travel to Human Earth and fail at going there physically, but somehow a twisted and heavily sex-craving version of their essence manages to arrive in the form of a radioactive/mutation virus and turns hundreds if not millions of people into almost mindless rapist ponies. And the only two infected that can keep most of their sanity is the main character and his co-protagonist. Yes, that makes sense. Also note the most on the sanity comment; at least one of them still has the sex crave to spread the "gift" of the STD mutative essence virus thing, and is only able to hold back because of the main character, who only has his sanity because apparently he's gained the essence of an alicorn which was... supposedly powerful enough to resist the corruption that took place over the other forms of the essence? I'm trying to make some sort of logic out of this; is it working? also, you should probably do a flashback chapter to equestria on how they found Non-EQG Human Earth and what went wrong with the dimensional teleport spell and what sort of repercussions that it had on Equestria. Maybe have a secondary main character over in Equestria? Maybe a corrupted form of human essence found its way to Equestria and is having a similar effect on ponies? Possibly instead of mindless rapists the infected instead become ridiculously smart and would decline free sex if offered? I'm just throwing ideas around; maybe you could apply one or two of them in future chapters. Oh yeah, I also had the idea that when William fully turns, the humanified (and maybe one or two ponies turned into Barack Obama or Vladimir Putin or something) ponies get sent to earth and the ponified humans get sent to Equestria (to go and rape the ponies?) for some mysterious reason. I don't know, I'm only throwing ideas around.
5988626 Ideas are a good thing. They're not -exactly- sex starved so much as fluid exchange works great. A great big sloppy kiss works, and they were doing that too. The main thing is that they want to get in close and exchange fluids, so, yeah, sex works pretty well and feels good for everyone involved, so why not that?
William's change is slower in coming, but he's becoming something more powerful. The more powerful bit may be why he's changing slower, and changing slower is helping keep his mind intact. Every change is bit by bit, and he has time to adjust his perception of 'self', unlike Sandra who basically stopped being Sandra over a frighteningly short period of time and had to basically reinvent herself as William's loyal herd member. This is not to say that William's psyche isn't being tested, lord knows that's not true!
A flashback/explanation from the pony's view of how this all went wrong would be a solid idea, likely in the form of Luna explaining things, since she has a line of communication open to William.
Welcome to the story! Glad to have you aboard.
5988647 I'm glad to be of service, I may not be your typo buster (I would but I don't have motivation for it), but, being Samuel Lyons of East Tennessee, I'm my town's local do-everything teen. I do/have done: computer programming, computer repairs (both software and hardware), unofficial professional gaming (Ask my razer DA Chroma mouse. Also my gaming rig's motherboard broke and I don't have the money for a new one, so I've been forced onto a fairly cheap laptop FTTB until I can get either a new desktop of a new motherboard replacement), Medium/Semi-Advanced Algebra without a calculator OR paper (it's all in my head lol), Metalworking (I'm currently making a custom Shiv using a block of Iron and a motorized metal Grinder in my High School's Autobody Shop. I have to keep the blade part dull/flat so I don't get into trouble over it), I've done writing, some of both good and bad qualities (Look at Living Hell, my personal masterpiece in progress, then turn around and look at New York Nuke, my deepest regret as a writer so far). I suppose that I'm just a really versatile and adaptable person. Maybe when I get a job I'll be able to get a replacement for that busted motherboard. I'll probably look at other options though, I've had nothing but problems out of Dell, I wish to not continue that streak. I'm rambling into another wall of text, aren't I? Sorry, I'm known for that. I'm going to leave it at this before it gets too much bigger. Sorry, if I come off as bragging, I really don't mean to. I don'g have a job and can't do much as a result, so what I can do/have done I kind of take pride in. So I guess I'm just that do-it-all guy that does stuff. Damit I said I was goind to leave it three sentences ago. GAH!
5988793 It happens to the best of us. So who's your favorite character so far if I may pry?
5988647 Also, if it's primarily spread through fluid, why not just have them throw spit and stuff, or maybe even spread it by throwing saliva ball paperwads at people or something? Intimate contact is great, sure, but spitwads and straws and prankster ponies isn't a bad idea. Sure, the rapists are pleased... in THAT way, but I seriously doubt that every last infected is/will become a rapist. Certainly AT LEAST THE INFECTED CHILDREN will spread it using spitwad/straw pranks. Also, Fav Character? Hmmm... maybe it's the non-infected woman that accepts the protags into her hideout despite them being already infected. I don't know.
5988812 We haven't run into any little ones yet, but I see nothing wrong with the general idea of taking more than one tactic to get the job done. As was hinted before, contaminating the water supply could get most of the city sick without ever setting eyes on a single soul.
5988826 There's also the idea that the children won't have gone insane, maybe the teens especially would be more accepting of the change and be able to maintain sanity. Because, you know, they're changing anyway? Like, puberty and stuff? And maybe the pre-teens wouldn't even be completely awafe that they changed outside of them being forced to go quadruped. If you think about it like that, Children and Teens would be the most likely candidates to maintain sanity post-infection.
5988844 That cuts both ways. A teen/pre-teen has a delicate sense of self, that could be thrown entirely off kilter. While adults are stereotyped with static perceptions, they are also strong. A child could become entirely lost in a new world, or take it up and run with it. Some may just go 'Oh wow, I'm a pony, neat!' and run with that, while others go completely nuts, or catatonic, though this isn't untrue with adults, though we don't focus on completely nonfunctional transitions, as they don't do much and aren't likely to be found before they quietly pass from the world.
5988853 Bah, theorizing. Theories, theories, theories. God dayum theories. That delicate sense of self in teens cuts both ways in its own way; I, being sixteen, know this. I have a self image of short mexican mustache, thin body, right side part in my black hair, denim pants, and Crimson red jacket with the sleeve cuffs ripped off. I could live with suddenly being infected with a pony-mutating virus as long as I get to keep the part in my hair, pull the jacket over my barrel section and maybe or maybe not have my hooves fit through the sleeves, and maybe be able to find denim jeans custom fitted for my new form. In fact, I plan on writing a chapter relative to that on my Self Insert Living Nightmare fan-sequel sometime in the near future. And stuff, I guess. Teens' self image can be very stubborn yet very versatile at the same time in that fashion.
5988891 I hate to comment on this, but aren't you young to be reading this horrible trash? Only adult minds should be warped by this filth.
5988902 Trust me, I began maturing late, but when I matured, I matured at lightspeed. I even have HUGE stretch marks on my back to prove it. Also, I was mentally overprotected for the first... eleven(?) years of my life, and the internet... kind of fixed the mental maturity. In fact, I'm one of the most mentally mature people in my school; I have a laid back personality, but I do my work provided someone has a job for me to do. Also, you know what's ironic? English is one of my weakest subjects, somewhat by cause that I CANNOT write an essay, yet I'm writing multiple walls of texts as well as have a 10,000+ word story-in-progress and make next to no spelling errors ninety-nine percent of the time. Also, partly thanks to my friends Brandon, Tyler, Anthony, and Brian I am the way I am attitude-wise. They all have warped minds (Brandon in particular), and TBH, I don't really have a warped mine per se, I've instead gained resistance to the mind-warping because of them. I don't read outright clopfics, in fact if I find a story and all that's if it is purely sex material, I stop reading. But since you actually have a story that involves sex but isn't purely about sex, being that it actually has a developing story, I'm still reading. Yeah, sure William gets raped twice on the way to get bottled water and TV dinners but he doesn't just start looking to go and do things like that himself, instead using dedication to finish the original job.
[url=yackaro.deviantart.com/art/Living-Hell-Walk-Through-Canterlot-Sketch-533730624] Here , have a sketch I made based on my story's current upcoming chapter 11.
5989165 HiE? I have one going.
5989178 The story is actually a hybrid between HiE and Human Turned Pony. Trust me, go to my profile and read up on it and you will get where the hybrid piece comes in at Chapter 10 - HiE. Sorry about the spoiler. Oh, and please don't read New York Nuke; I want to bury that junk as far as I can, it's so bad that it is part of why I haven't made much progress on Living Hell more recently; I'm discouraged because I'm kind of scared that I'll turn it into another horrible fic like NYN did. w/evs though, I'm sure it won't.
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Keep in mind that each ponies' mutation seems to follow a purpose of some basic kind. Roles.
I think William is meant to be the brain of the infection, at least locally. He's going to be the top dog, the big boss, the Overmind.
Thus, mentally he'll be a lot different from the random infected.
Humans! Humans! Humans! Humans!
Don't mess with humanity, we bite back harder. Either way, the real problem for them is going to be when the military adapts and soldiers start wearing hazmat suits. That and watch out for napalm, helicopters, flamethrowers, bunker busters (for killing subterran targets), and other weapons they can use to clean the city.
5990160 Yes... hive mind. I got that leader vibe when he started growing wings, and confirmed it when he used hive mind comms in his sleep. I theorize that he got the Alicorn strand, and because that form of the essence contains such a large amount of power, it resisted the corruption of the void world, unlike the other strands/forms. This is my personal idea on why he's able to maintain sanity (despite being infected, growing a second head that can take partial control of his body at will, etc.)
David Silver, I like how you get chapters done fast. Good Job!
5990902 It is a pleasure to be productive. Liking the result?
So, now we just wait for that one hardcore ex-Marine survivor to clean up this whole mess, summer action movie style.
Humanity shall prevail!
5990565 theres also not goin to be a Geneva convention, or anything similar, to help the ponies
So lets go over the main character some more. he is a two headed pink human alicorn that has a swarm like telepathy skill and a massive horse cock.
Thats one hellava OC you got there.
6236877 He gets better/worse.
This story is wonderfuly different, thank you so much, for your weird imagination. Finaly something original to read.
6315581 I do what I must because I can.
You know, while I feel REALLY uncomfortable reading sex, I don't mind romance and making out, plus you seem to warn about clop scenes (thanks for that). So despite this by far being the weirdest fic I've read, it's also one of the most original, which is very entertaining. I shall read on
6454989 You just reminded me to tag two chapters. Glad you're enjoying!
I can't think of something entertaining and silly to go with this but I guess this makes sense. If everything ponies are passed through, then some part of the Sisters would as well.
6510367 I'm glad you're having fun with the story as it rolls on and on. I am reading your comments, every one. :)