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I'm still wondering which pony's 'essence' he sat in during the earlier chapter. Can't think of too many ponies with a pink horn.
5978754 No one promised it was a particular show pony's evidence, though who left that there is still a valid question.
three headed pony.... yeah there's no way of predicting the story, wow when Luna say's warped and perverted by the void she means it
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Planet Terror had them all go to the tropics to relax on the beach every day, and kill any undead that bother them.
5978980 Pony hydras are only the start. I do hope you're enjoying the story.
5978997 indeed i am... it's different from the apocalyptic world that i'm used to
5979038 I haven't read it, but they say there's no such thing as a new story, so welcome, fellow author!
PS: The protagonist was the first person on-screen to be infected while on-screen.
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While both stories do have viruses that transform people into ponies, the mechanics, and indeed the entire themes of each story couldn't be more different.
Your story, H1P1 is a pandemic disease story, complete with quarantines and trying to find the cure, as well as people just trying to adjust and move on with their lives after a transformation. I highly doubt that it'll necessitate the complete rebuild of society or anything like that, and instead may focus on adjusting as well as getting solutions for problems that never existed before, like cell phones and keyboards a pony could use, as well as fashionable designer saddle bags. Learning what effect magic has and how being able to move clouds could help desert areas, or what effect Earth Ponies would have in growing food, compared to the industrialized farming scene. And Magic. It's completely different from an end of the world scenario, which this story is.
This story on the other hoof is a weird combination of zombie genre homage, shock value, ponies, and shameless clop to bizarre hybrid pony images. It'll have the worst of humanity, the best of humanity, feral ponies, transformation trauma, mind control, and ponies touched by powers from The Void. It'll be focused on struggle and trying to understand the human/pony condition through the lens of the screwed up world setting of a cute, non-fatal (save for them humans who think they are in a different genre) zombie apocalypse.
I hope there is room for both looks at a pony virus from these different angles.
5979057 Keep up the work :D , the story is great so far
*Shudders* I have a question. Why do all the great ideas here end up bringing in sex? I don't see the appeal.
5979662 I am a huge fan of Isaac Asimov, pioneer in the field of science fiction. He also appreciated filth. He told many a raunchy limerick and saucy scene in his tales and felt no shame. Why should I?
5979215 Alrighty then, this can be it's thing and mine can be my thing, mine is definitely going in a different direction, so let's call it a friendship Silver. I'll call you that since your first name is weird to call someone by since it's also mine. (I think that this may get awkward for me.)
5979719 The coincidences grow stronger by the moment!
5979689 Alright! But seeing as I'm non sexually active, my opinion of it is low and I don't particularly care for it, it just makes me feel awkward.
5979746 Agreed!
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It's a complicated answer on many levels.
The short answer is Mr. Silver likes writing bizarre sexual situations and so does his audience, and there aren't many weirder situation than a weird pseudo
zombiepony apocalypse turning into thezombiepony genre equivalent of Monster Girl Quest.The longer answer is that zombie stories typically cover a bunch of different things, and frankly this concept can't cover many of them.
The infection is non-fatal; the actual
zombiesponies aren't undead but living things, and hints that they still have awareness and in the protagonist's case, still is as much of a person as he was before; the attacking ponies don't aim to hurt humans, only are forced to infect them with spreading infected fluid, which could come in many different forms; scarcity of resources isn't that big of a deal to the protagonist because his threats aren't from other infected but rather from humans, and ponies have more resources they can eat from, as well as being able to drink possibly infected water sources no problem.So, major portions of the stories besides visiting almost every single zombie trope in existence is basically observing the collapse of civilization, dealing with their transformation and new abilities, meeting new people, dealing with human survivors who believe they are in a slightly different genre (and will probably lose because I think the ponies are much more efficient at spreading their infection than zombies normally are portrayed as being), and bizarre encounters with other infected.
Bizarre sexual encounters that is.
It all adds up to something that looks at first glance like a zombie apocalypse, but is... different. Weirder. More abstract. Almost Lovecraftian at points. And it entertains, all of it. Even the sexual assaults when he expected to be shot at while running for his life, rather than fearing for the safety of his pants.
I still feel like things are moving a bit fast and it makes me think a little of how Five Score Divided by Four progressed: it took it's time, explored the characters a bit and made a nice gradual climb with it's story. So far we've had a pretty pony apocalypse break out, one of the side characters morphs into a pony and the protagonist has been sexually assaulted twice, all in 4 rather short chapters. These are just my thoughts on the matter mind you, and only you know what you want this story to be, but it might help the story if you take things a tad slower.
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Perhaps, but consider:
There is a philosophy that a story tagged mature and sex should have earn those tags within the first 10k words. Otherwise, it's stringing readers along who were interested in those things.
Any single clop oriented story you can think of would have gotten into sexy times by now. Only stories where it is a side concern would wait longer.
As for this story, it's not quite clear from the chapter in question that it's meant to be a clop scene . . . Yes it has sex parts, but it's done in a kind of weird and disorienting way. I think the weirdness of it is supposed to stand out in contrast to what Will expected.
5980179 Hey, I asked him about the clop last chapter, I'm not concerned about that. I just feel like some pacing is needed for the overall story, that's all. Also I can't say I subscribe to that philosophy, it seems a bit generalist. If a story's good it can take all the time it wants, just as long as the payoff is a good one.
5980250 I hope the story is not suffering for the pacing. This is a requested story, so there is a bit of a need to keep things moving to fit in the word count as well. The story will probably not be a 100k+ monster as some of my others.
Huh. Hydra pony? Seems like equine essence wasn't the only kind that crossed the void. That, or it really got lost in translation. In any case, we'll soon see if William really is immune to further transformation.
In any case, as he noted, these supply runs are not a long-term solution. He's going to need to find something sustainable, but I'm not sure what he can get to that qualifies.
Also:
Had. Tense consistency.
5980380 Fixed! Indeed, how long before the obvious places are picked clean?
Is it odd that I feel bad for the tatzl pegasus?
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Not at all. She just wanted a friend and tried to make one as best she could. From Will's perspective, it was horrifying and violating. From hers, extreme pony mouth hugs seemed like the best course of action, and she still doesn't understand why her potential friend bopped her on the nose. Condemning her would be like getting mad at a puppy for peeing on the carpet, only with more tentacle rape.
What?
extra space
5981760 Fixed, oops. I'm always amazed at how something I heard right in my head fails to make it to my fingers.
When is the "one-surviver-that-knows-his-shit-with-a-big-gun" gonna show up?
5990470 Sounds like someone that could be inherently quite dangerous to our protagonists.
5990511 ok... When is the "one-Infected-survivor-that-knows-his-shit-with-a-big-gun" gonna show up?
I wanna call this a spin on the conversion bureau stories, though that is rather inaccurate. It's better then some of those stories. It manages the big, world shifting without to much detached political stuff.
Oh.... oh is THAT gonna be the main draw here? Well, I was warned, at least. I might be wrong, too. This seems like an extremely large amount of effort, so I doubt it was just clop bait.
6114518 We have clop, and we have lots of not-clop. The story mostly takes itself seriously while having a mildly, absurdly, and entirely bizzare sexy end of the world situation.
"...I got the milk."
"Where are your pants?"
"... ... You'd be surprised what it takes to get some milk in this town."
"I don't want to know."
Not much of an apocolypse. Keep in mind the humans are the ones causing death and destruction. It's just a cataclysmic change, and to be honest not one that's all that terrible really. Our world kinda sucks to live in at present, after all.
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I like what I'm reading, I never really notice typo's ever as I make a million of them myself
Keep on writing. And yeah this story is done but don't stop writing
6795994 I don't plan to! This story has a sequel still rolling.
ch4
A shame Will hadn't accepted fate to becoming a pony and realised that a herd is probably inevitable, Cloud Hood would have made a perfect tribal trio. What little we saw of her, she seemed a good pony.
People are pretty chill about being raped by alien equine horrors in this apocalypse.
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By people, we mean a specific person, I presume? He has his reasons.
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Maybe it's just William. Perhaps he's been aware of clop and similar concepts for years and he's completely desensitized. Or perhaps he's in shock so it hasn't registered yet. Either way, it's disgusting.