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good chapter!
Congratulations on the feature.
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Don't remember any mention of it, so I'd thought I'd do so.
6106744 Woot. We're famous! Sort of.
Typo discovered upon landing.
6106744 That library though.
6106781 Fixed and found another typo hiding nearby.
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Not sure if it's better as such, but about 1600 of that is a 'Tracking' folder that has slowly but surely grown to blob proportions.
Been meaning to clean it out slash actually start reading at least a few of those stories, but just haven't had time. You know how it is.
I have to wonder about this nursing bit. So far, it seemed who ever latched onto Windy ended up becoming part of her herd. So is this the beginning of Windy going full leader here?
6107283 Will would have prefered to keep that as a special thing, but life doesn't like cooperating.
*puts on editors hat*
"They were a haggardly looking lot"
"They were a haggard looking lot" (You are using it as an adjective only)
Pretty much all I could find.
*takes off hat*
As for the story so far, quite interesting. I have read a lot of your stuff and this is one of the better post-apoc ones. I look forward to more :)
Nursing seems to be becoming s big part of this. Makes me wonder how William and Cindy are producing so much milk and how big those crotch tits of theirs are.
Also, wonder if there'll. be a pony who's special talent is producing milk and feeding it to ponies. *Cough* Milky Way *Cough*
Yikes. It makes sense that unled ponies in an urban environment aren't going to do well, but it's still sad to see. Still, with Will and Cindy on site, things should take a turn for the better quickly.
Also:
We were lowered. The helicopter's doing the lowering.
6109904 The helicopter did not do the lowering at all, the pilot did. They lowered as a group, it is grammatically correct.
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The verb "to lower" still requires an object. You can't just lower without going into further detail. Something has to be lowered, whether it's volume, mood, or a helicopter.
6110047 Well, carrying on from the previous story we know he had a few friends with him in the bird. Combined with the pilot and a gunner or two that would be considered a "we". Heh, technically, William can happily use the royal "we" as well as the group "we" all on his own now :)
Got Milk?
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