Page generated in 0.045 seconds
Total duration
700 users online
1,012,359 hits today, 2,818,023 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Darn you, I wanna know NOW...
6059004 Now is also the time to throw in your suggestions, if you have one.
I vote for multiple uterii to help with her talent ;) though that would imply embracing her talent more than we have seen so far.
being a herm would help too, but we have 2 main herms already, and it would mostly only help if she studs around, which seems out of character.
More subtly, if hard to describe, would be optimizing her for easy births. And another option would be switching to egg laying. (Platipony!)
Doesn't have to be breeding related, but nothing else comes to my mind for her.
6059048 Partial shapeshifting to switch between the 3 pony races, to if possible make the offspring more likely to belong to that specific tribe.
You know, it's very easy to forget that Will has wings so far in this story. They haven't used them, either for gesturing, covering, or flying, and as far as I can tell they haven't been a focus during any intimate scenes after they appeared.
I'm rather curious as to the final form of Sandra. I don't think cross tribes is allowed for none Alicorns (it's still not clear if Crystal has a horn or is casting spells some other way), so probably no wings or horn. Maybe a second head to match Will? Another futanari like Crystal? Becoming a full Tatzlpony?
6059072 What is she missing besides the eye marks?
6059106
Technically the original Tatzlpony design did the whole soft-vore thing; they have a second stomach-- well, more a very stretchable internal holding sack since it doesn't dissolve what is placed inside it. So lots of swallowing and spitting stuff (and ponies) out. Lots of emphasis on using the tongues for everything, not just holding, but also exploring and tasting, well, everything. Especially other ponies.
*edit* Not that I think it would work on Will as he is way too large, but other ponies that are the same size or smaller, like those Pegasi, foals or a young kid, sure.
I would completely understand if you chose to ignore that design element.
vhat vill happen?
6059060
As strange as it may sound, that could actually work, and be something Sandra would ask for.
Thing is, at the moment, she only wants to carry Will/Cindy... Willindy's? foals. But, Willindy is taller than Sandra (I'm not sure how tall our ponytaur is actually. Is she celestia, luna, or some other hieght?)
Anyway, growing tall enough to properly couple with Willindy might be on her mind. This could tie in with the multi uterii of her talent, since Sandra would be bigger, she'd now have enough size to actually possess more than one without being too bloated to walk.
6059190
Is Will's pony-portion bigger than Sandra's? I was unclear on that. I figured him to basically be normal sized pony with the neck/head replaced by the top half of a two-headed anthro-pony. So that'd put him at about human height, but the only awkward thing with coupling would be his top half being potentially awkward. Like, if he's on top, it's this big towering portion of his body above her. And his join-point would need quite a range of motion for him to be able to lie on his back. So.. either a become a taur as well or maybe a long, sinuous neck like a dragon (her tail is already thicker like a dragon anyways) so they can kiss properly during coupling could work.
Normally I would suggest hands, or maybe a horn as a substitute, but her tongues are already substitute hands. And if I misremembered and Will/Cindy's pony portion is abnormally large, of course she'd want to match.
Almost forgot to comment.
With the pegasus flock we now have a potential military force in addition to the changelings for a non-conversion threat. If Will can steer their mutation to tone down their violent instincts to where they can chose whether or not to be violent toward humans, and maybe give them military-specialized mutations (perhaps with a focus on non-lethal natural weapons, like paralysis poisons), include giving at least some the limbs to manipulate human weapons midair, then they could have a reserve combat force in place to protect themselves from a post disinfection military raid.
That's key, because as we discussed in the comments of another chapter, without the infection threat the ponies face potentially being wiped out by the humans.
6059190
I nominate "Windy" as a combined name, or part of a pony name (ex. Windy Day), gender pronoun 'her'. The heads could retain their individual names.
Looks like Ian will be the diplomatic bridge. A valuable resource to exchange in trade for cease-fire with the humans.
6059060
I'll admit, I'm kinda liking the idea of that fertility stuff. Either way, with egg laying or not. I think egg laying would be better though since it allows her to fulfill her talent while not being disadvantaged by constant pregnancy.
6059106
*Sigh*....Calling it now, you're gonna have Sandra ask for a dick or two, or wings, or a horn, or a horn-dick or wing-dick combo. If it wasn't apparent, I'm really not fond of the 'guy grows a vag' and 'girl grows a dick' thing, which you do a lot. Story's still good enough to overlook it, but I'll be damned if it doesn't rub me the wrong way, no pun intended.
6060361 This is your chance to give your thoughts, though I guess saying what you don't want to see counts.
Further unity! The fastest way to the pegasus heart is through the stomach, especially when the pegasi are stuck on hunting and gathering.
As for Sandra, she'd probably appreciate having hands again, and those tongues are already pretty agile...
Also:
Capitalization needed.
6060501 Fixed, thankee.
it looks as if things are shaping up really good.
6060428
Just a horn or wings please. Or maybe hands.
6060671 Not feeling the seemingly popular egg option?
6060746
*Looks therough the comments section*
That...actually makes a lot of sense. Yeah, I'm on board with that, but I still think she should get wings.
I'm also liking the one guy's comment about altering the pegasi flock to have mutations specialized towards non-lethal combat and heavy defense, for when and if the humans attack before a peaceful solution can be found.
6059072
Can I get a link to that original tatzlpony story?
6060746
If you do go with the egg angle, you might want to alter Sandra's cutie mark to mirror it. The current one won't make much sense otherwise.
6060800
6059106
Not a story, but the original bio:
http://vorelectric.deviantart.com/art/Tatzlpony-Species-449514999
Of course, they are portrayed as not being significantly more intelligent than a dog either, so I'm not fond of that interpretation.
It doesn't do the second stomach thing I mentioned, I seemed to misremembered it. Not that the original explanation makes that much more sense, as it still has the soft-vore thing.
6060830 Heh, the basically ORIGINAL CONTENT DO NOT STEAL watermark makes me giggle.
6060830
Neat! I wish I could make a story about them.
6060800
6060830
6060837
Never, ever thought I'd post this on this site, but here's one of the first bits of Tazljack content ever made. It shows rather well how that sack is supposed to work, without having it be that creepy.
Basically, it's supposed to be kinda like those frogs that keep their own tadpoles in their mouth, just with added weirdness thanks to magic.
derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/3/16/577077__safe_applejack_screencap_smile_apple+bloom_edit_open+mouth_wat_species+swap_wide+eyes.jpg
derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/4/8/595589__safe_applejack_comic_cute_apple+bloom_wat_bed_hug_belly_vore.png
Source, and source.
A bit 'eww' worthy with the implication that it could also be used for keeping live prey for a later snack, but that's biology for you.
That one last panel is just pure 'dawwww,' though!
6062178
Cool.
6060837
I found one!
6121707 Fixed!