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Silver Wings

School sucks, we all know it, but it's not school that makes it suck so much. It's the bullies that go to it. Scootaloo, knows this all too well. What happens when she finally breaks?

Silver Spoon, that stuck up brat that everyone hates, well almost everyone. That bully in the schoolyard, the rich, smart filly. After Diamond takes it to far, Silver is forced to pick sides, her best friend, or the ones she has picked on for so long.

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Sunset_Shimmer83

Sunset_Shimmer83 #1 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

poor scootaloo,

Darkshade666

Darkshade666 #2 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!

Silver_Star

Silver_Star #3 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 2 · ·

To be honest I am not entirely sure what to make of this story, I mean it feels like this should be an important event from a much bigger one. Yet without build up or context set to give reason to the self mutilation it feels more like its a grab at emotions using tragedy. That is not to say this can't work if properly given time to develop a tragic story can be very gripping. However giving how little of scootaloo we get in the story prior to this scene all we have is the climax of a broader story. This of course makes us feel distant from the tragedy and less sympathetic to her circumstance. That is of course the main problem is the story shows scootaloo only as the victim and not much else. The rainbowdash worshipping daredevil filly we know from the show is absent replaced by a victim, who is defined by the tragedy. While this may resonate with some, most won't find the story very attractive due to the lack of anything of true substance characters. Still it is a rather good idea, if only you could flush out the characters first.

EpicShadowz