Celestia, why would you need even more Pussy and Cock after dealing with Griffons for who knows how long?

Well then... 3 parts to this comment and a second one on the other ending.

1: Sir, because you got me here some how, you deserve a like.

2: I thought this would be like last time, but nope you filled me with tears of love (dem salty tears...)

3: Because fuck Cadence shoots Cadence in the face. Oops.

5933741 Um... okay. Fingering must've been hard...

YOU SIR ARE A GREAT WRITER I DIP MY HAT TO YOU AND ANOTHER NOTE OBVIOUSLY GOOD IN BED YOUR GIRLFRIEND/BOYFRIEND MUST LOVE YOU THAT IS ALL THAT IS NEEDED TO BE SAID.

~Bronyprophet~

There is a problem with this.

Twilight did not not luna till after the summer equinox. Yet here you have Celestia mention her by name to filly twilight.

They could have at least waited for me...

I ROFLED THERE!!!

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I feel like you missed the joke in the comment but I really can't tell.

...now I kinda want a sequel where Cadence catches them and joins in

A nice cozy visit in the Crystal Empire...

This was great, but it would be even better if when Twilight orgasms you talked less about her 'squirting' and more about how her pussy is convulsing and clamping on his dick. Honestly, one squirt is rare, but multiple squirts is just pushing it. Unless she was peeing slightly...

I do have to wonder why the downvotes are so high. Anyone who downvoted want to explain themselves to me?

>Twilight thought that maybe pushing the Shining’s cum out of her
u wot

This is beautifully well written and so wrong on so many levels at the same time. I don't really know what to say, the way you write is awesome, it's capturing and so vivid, yet the content leaves me with a mixture of feelings that reach from face-palm snicker to oh-hell-NO. There were a quite vast amount of scenes where I almost got aroused, but then I remembered the incest and of my two siblings.

Great story for the writing, confused feelings over the content. Upvote nevertheless.

That ending paragraph though XD hahahaha! X'D
Lordy luu I love it.

Nice start to this!

5939489 that comment absolutely killed me hahahahaha

6019430 RIP in coleslaw

Let me guess, next is Cadance's bed?

Heh Heh, Awesome story. If you ever make a sequel, let's squeeze in a bit of anal, and... Molestia returns, and seeks a familiar, pleasure...

Omg!!! That was some good shit!!!
I totally loved everything, and the visuals... my god the visuals great job all around. Thank you.

They could have at least waited for me...

I DIED

my favorite ship in the show, so intimate

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Okay?

Typo
"Celestia"

Don't you spell that with a capital" M" ;)

Daaww no comment from Celi!?

They could have at least waited for me...

Somehow, I knew Celestia would say/think something along those lines. I would have been slightly disappointed if she didn't.

me podrías dar la imagen que pusiste de portada?