My name is Winter. I am a griffin brought by a goddess to a world of magic with no goal in mind, but that doesn't stop me from creating enough chaos to make discord blush and having a kid..
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After slamming my face into a wall for a week. I finally got this out. Even though it was Very forced.
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And we all thank you for it! :)
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First off, you might want to tell us from the start of the chapter that we're viewing from the POV of Heather, since we aren't told until we're told who we aren't which is a bit further into the chapter, and as such, is confusing.
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Generally, people don't say "who is, normal is"
You could also say "The only person who is 'normal' is either mentally insane or has no sense of individuality, and tries to be someone they are not."
You see, is, has, and tries all allude to a single person, while are, have, and try aren't singular.
Examples of incorrect usage:
"That man are green"
"Those people is yelling"
"That man have no personality"
Actually, has can be used for a plural, but given the other words, it does not fit as well as have.
"Those people tries to be orange"
"That man try to jam his sword into someone's gut"
When I finish typing these, I realize you likely know this by now, since it's been two years and you've been writing, but I still have to point this out.