You misspelled wear and put ware! Who does that!?

5698423 some one has had a bad day.

5698630 I was drawing a blank there for names. So I chose something that came first to mind. That being my girlfriend calling me a sweat heart, so I thought "meh I got nothing else" pony names are weird anyways.

Well I can honestly say this, Storm Wing scares the absolute shit outa me.
Keep up the great work with this story, because I personally think this is really good!

5699557 This take place one year before the return of night mare moon, In the time it would take (two years) All would be back to normal. I thought it would make sense that the fleet was still under repair when grif needed it and celestias refusal to give him the ships he needed at the time, worked out logically. Plus to 'me' anyways I thought hard about zeta. I made sure he would not be affected in any way the city of hoofington by pony logic would be fixed in no time. The ship would be removed from all military records for at the time of canon. Their is no ship in equestria as advanced. Celestia would see winter as dead as well his brother. Thus making all canon stories un-altered

My God, Storm is more of a psychopath than Winter is, although in Winter's difference he is suffering from acute dark magic poisoning.

5698630 Good gods make for very boring stories.

Though, the reality is if they were giant asshats, the world's the ruled over would be basically hell.

So, it's a mixed bag. It's why most serious authors tended to steer clear of 'GODS', because you just can't write such immensely powerful entities realistically, as they are simply beyond mortal comprehension.

Now 'gods' are a different story. The lesser sort can be more easily beset with flaws since they're not all-powerful. The limitations give them more flexibility in action than simply power-gaming everyone and everything into oblivion when they get pissy.

Let me guess...the little brother....read Cupcakes at about 5 years old?

"Nope, why would I give a ship that could level mountains to someone who would abuse it,"

This implies not only that you(this story's winter) won't, but that Celestia will, which seems completely and utterly ass-backwards. A kind ruler, not shown to be a tyrant, which tries to spread peace, is less likely to use such destructive force while an impulsive cold-blooded killer with a psychopathic brother is more likely to take that power and level anything deemed to be an inconvenience.

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I don’t even know what’s is going one in this story!!!

Wtf is wrong with his brother?! Why would celestia be so stupid as to let him out?! Why wouldn’t she have him put in the dungeon or have him beheaded?!