New beginnings: Elementary

by Frisk Ramirez

Chapter:3 Welcome to the Cutie Mark Crusaders!

Button was dumb struck the filly he liked was standing in front of him "Hi Button can I talk to you." he wanted to faint why would she want to talk to him?

"Okay shoot." he calmly said even though he was nervous

"I was wondering if you would like to join our group the..." and they all said together "Cutie Mark Crusaders!" he was surprised by the offer then he had a thought what if she likes or maybe she's just being nice.

"Okay why not my friend Prokun will be moving here next week."

"Cool when he arrives we can ask him to join us if he wants." said Sweetie Belle excited the Button had another thought if I join this group I get to hang out with Sweetie and an added plus it will my mom off my back the bell rings signifying the end of school Dinky then asked "Button you want to go crusading with us we are going to go bungee jumping for our cutie mark." he packed up and answered her

"Okay this brave knight of Landor will go through heaven and hell to help you guys!" Scootaloo puts her hove around him "You are weird but awesome I think we will get along nicely." and Scootaloo and Button walk away and Snowdrop taps Sweetie on the shoulder "You like him don't you?" Sweetie blushed

"I think he's cute, nice, and brave..." she stars dazing off and thinks about her and Button on a date... "Sweetie Belle?" said Dinky and Snowdrop she snaps out of her trance

"Huh?" They noticed that her whole face is red

"Sweetie Belle we promise to keep your secret." she facehooves herself

"Was it that obvious?" the giggle and nod their heads, she sighs

Button, Scootaloo, and Apple bloom go to Rumble's house to pick him up "Hey Button." he looks at her

"Yeah Scoots?" she looks at him

"Do you like Sweetie Belle?" Button felt his face blush

"W-what d-do you m-mean." she sighs

"Because the way you look at her like she's the one for you." Button knew he had to tell it to some one sooner or alter so he told Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Rumble what he feels

"Yes I like Sweetie Belle sh-she makes me want to hug her and kiss her and protect her." Applebloom starts to tear up "Aww I knew ya like her but get one thing strait if you hurt her I will buck you so hard you will end up back in Manehatten." he didn't take her treat lightly Rumble then puts his wing around Scootaloo she then kissed him on the cheek then she tries to hide it "You saw nothing." she then runs to the bridge where they will be going bungee jumping he then thought I like my new friends maybe they will play game with him on his games.

Author's Note:

And so another chapter draws to a close we now know how they feel and already have Scootaloo and Rumble in a relation ship because why not also I know it says gore but that will come later for now GET OFF MY BACK ABOUT IT

Comments

[EquesTRON]

5629476
This story has a lot of problems, I'm afraid. Before I go into them, though, there's a couple of things I need to ask:

(1) How old are you? If you don't want to give an exact age, just tell me whether you've graduated high school (or college) yet, or are still in middle or elementary school.

(2) Is English your native language?

[Frisk Ramirez]

I'm 15 and not really I know Spanish

[Mr mustash]

Ok I have not red this story yet, but from the description I don't see any thing that leads to gore, and why is there no romance tag?

[Frisk Ramirez]

I haven't gotten to that part yet! Man there's only three chapters and i'm staring them on a light note

[Frisk Ramirez]

Rocking out to these songs when i was writing the chapters

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, and this

[Frisk Ramirez]

K let me give you the jist of it Button and his mom arrive in Ponyville leving is best friend and former crush back in Manehatten he finds out his friend is going to be moving in to the same neighborhood as Button. Button unpacks and that's the end of chapter one

[Frisk Ramirez]

well i'm sorry I just got introduced into the universe so I don't know everyone perfectly I try to us the ones I know

[Rainboom H Harmonia]

so Rumbleloo and Button Belle so far.

[Frisk Ramirez]

K thanks! every tip helps!

[Rainboom H Harmonia]

5633833 make sure you use the double arrow to let the person know that you're responding to them

[Frisk Ramirez]

>>Rainboom424 Yes and I will be adding more in the sequels