New beginnings: Elementary

by Frisk Ramirez

Chapter:2 First Day of school Troubles

Button wakes up at around seven AM and get's ready for the new school year he puts on his propeller hat and gets his Ipony and Joyboy and puts it in his bag with his papers and pencils and runs down stairs but trips luckily his mom catches him and his bag "Button you have to be more careful" he looks at her

"Gracias mama." he had to take Spanish in his old school because his school was so diverse

"De nada Button." Button kisses her an the cheek and grabs his lunch and runs to school "Have a nice day at school Button!" yelled Love Tap he couldn't hear her he was already too far away from her "Celestia guide him." she prayed. Button made it to school Ms.Cheerliee stopped him "Whoa slow down who are you?" Button looks at her

"Are you Ms.Cheerliee?" she looked at him and then understood everything

"Are you Love Tap's son Button Mash?" he looked at her

"Yes I am the brave warrior Sir Button Mash." she giggles

"Okay Button." she walks him into the room and points him to a seat in between two ponies one white with a pink and purple mane and emerald eyes he felt a shiver go up his back and he thought She's beautiful more than Princess Peach and Zelda combined and in the other seat is a pink pony with a tiara as a cutie mark when he looked back at the white unicorn she didn't have a cutie mark so he sat in the seat he felt uncomfortable because the grey filly was studying him.

When it was finally lunch Button sat under a tree and pulled out his Ipony and Joyboy and played music while listening to music on Ponyfiy then two ponies come up to him "Hey Blank Flank!" Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon said across the way Sweetie Belle watch the pair walk up to Button "Guys I'm going to be back I have to check on something." Dinky followed her

"You need help?" she looked at her

"No don't worry I got this." "Hey Blanky you listening?" she pushes the Joyboy down that's when Button snapped

"Don't touch my Joyboy... I'm warning you." she couldn't see his face his mane was covering it she moved back and looked over to see that Silver bailed out

"Y-You can't tell me w-what to d-do!" he looked at her with his amber eyes she ran away to Silver Spoon hiding in a bush and told Silver "No one has stood up to me like that before... I like him... he's interesting." Sweetie Belle stood there amazed nopony stood up to them before it was amazing she looked back at them they all looked at him then they all went over to her Snowdrop looked at her "Did he just stand up to them!" they all looked surprised then they noticed he didn't have a cutie mark so Sweetie Belle walked over to him and thought Maybe he's not a bad pony. Maybe he's just miss understood. then Button yelled "No! that was my last life on the last level! NOOOOO! Snake? Snake? SNAAAAAAKE!" Never mind... she tapped him on the shoulder he looked up and sees the filly that he had a crush on "Hi" he said

Author's Note:

And so it begins! thank you for viewing and also please leave some type of help i'm new to this game so I need all the help I can get

Comments

[Frisk Ramirez]

I love the pic sooo cute

[Sea_Swirl]

I think this is a good story! But you might want to separate the lines when somepony else talks.

Example:

Button wakes up at around 7 am and get's ready for the new school year he puts on his propeller hat and gets his Ipony and Joyboy and puts it in his bag with his papers and pencils and runs down stairs but trips luckily his mom catches him and his bag "Button you have to be more careful."

he looks at her "Gracias mama." he had to take Spanish in his old school because his school was so diverse

"De nada Button." She replied.

And it would help the readers understand more if you put a little more detail in the chapters, I had the same problem!

But other than that I think the story will be great!! Good luck on the next chapter!

[Frisk Ramirez]

Thank You! it's great to hear constructive pointers

[Rainboom H Harmonia]

grey pony with a tiara as a cutie mark

Diamond Tiara is pink, not grey
Silver Spoon has a spoon for a cutie mark

[Just another hoerse love]

Isn't snow drop blind?

[Pegasister_Animations]

Awesome story so far
Few mistakes here and there but understandable