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Interesting start. Looks promising. Of course, on more than a few occasions stories that start off well have then turned sour and unpleasant, so withhold my final judgement... but so far, so good. The reassuring line at the end gives me some confidence so far.
The description and storytelling is also very well done. Very vivid, very natural. The behavior of the other ponies - guarded and defensive, but still willing to forgive and give Trixie a chance - is just like how I think they should act. You're doing well.
I'm curious as to how Twilight found out what Trixie was up to, as I can't see her breaking into a locked home without some motivation. Was she spying, maybe? Maybe she thought a little breach of privacy was acceptable just to ascertain that Trixie wasn't actually plotting something. (Feeling Pinkie Keen showed that she's certainly not above a bit of stalking, after all.) Perhaps the next chapter can show events from Twilight's point of view and we see what drives her.
Good stuff