5977569 I'm really good for random bits of history trivia. Given enough time, I'm find a way to introduce the Swedish hakkapeliitta into one of my clopfics.
Chapter nine is about halfway done and looking good so far. I pretty much have chapter 10 mapped out in my head too. We're looking at about 12 chapters, maybe 13. Hello to all the Gentleman's Gift aficionados coming over here!
6025901 Fixed. I'll admit, I'm very new to writing and my editor does what he can but can't catch everything.
6026326 I'm leaving whole words out? I'll take another look at the scene you mentioned and see if I can improve it. At the time, I thought it would bog down the scene if I explained Richard's joke.
Oh, we got his joke. As humans we get human cultural things and explaining that to Rose would have been short and quick; 'it's just a human military reference, we're trained to only give name, rank, and serial number when being interrogated.' What was frustrating was not finding out why Rose reacted so badly, what Rose thought he meant... I realize this reply is rather late but I never got a notice of your reply... now to read the modded chapter five.
Good chapter. Too bad Richard couldn't tell Rose he loves her back; guess that will just have to wait until breakfast the next morning.
Great Chapter!
5959687 Rose and Richard will certainly have a lot to talk about in lovely Canterlot.
5960050 Thanks! I think the story has been getting steadily getting better since chapter five. Here's hoping I can keep the streak alive...
5961192 Indeed they were, friend. Indeed they were.
5977569 I'm really good for random bits of history trivia. Given enough time, I'm find a way to introduce the Swedish hakkapeliitta into one of my clopfics.
Cute story :)
Poor girl, why sex related things are always that complicated?
5977850 because every religous group won't have something to dream about afterlife if sex things were allways easy
nice chapter ^^
5985733 good food and high speed Internet? Or ponis? XD
6001921 Only one way to find out! You're in for a treat!
Chapter nine is about halfway done and looking good so far. I pretty much have chapter 10 mapped out in my head too. We're looking at about 12 chapters, maybe 13. Hello to all the Gentleman's Gift aficionados coming over here!
6025850 I said I would delete it and I did.
6025901 Fixed. I'll admit, I'm very new to writing and my editor does what he can but can't catch everything.
6026326 I'm leaving whole words out? I'll take another look at the scene you mentioned and see if I can improve it. At the time, I thought it would bog down the scene if I explained Richard's joke.
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Oh, we got his joke. As humans we get human cultural things and explaining that to Rose would have been short and quick; 'it's just a human military reference, we're trained to only give name, rank, and serial number when being interrogated.' What was frustrating was not finding out why Rose reacted so badly, what Rose thought he meant... I realize this reply is rather late but I never got a notice of your reply... now to read the modded chapter five.
6029334 Not sure if serious at this point.
Poor Rose, this long distance thing is killing her...