Nice! A sequel I wasn't expecting! Can't wait to see where things go!

Seeing this scene from The Scent of Prey from the other side is brilliant! Before, you told it from the Gentleman's perspective, and now you do it from Roseluck's. It's actually even better this way.

5785400 I'll be honest, I've been planning it since I wrote the first. It wasn't until a couple months ago when I decided to man up and write it.

5785425 I know you've told me not to feel bad about TSoP, and I don't; I did the best I could with what I had. Still, reading this perspective and going back and reading Stuntman's, it makes what I wrote back then look like a pose. I have no idea why this is the character I bonded with, but I'm just going to go with it.

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You found your muse. Be happy for that.

For Richard "Stuntman" Eckhart, the night did not end her involvement with a certain Ponyville flower vendor,

the night did not end her involvement

her involvement

her

I think I see a little mistake here.

Roseluck is best flower pony. Bonus points for butt stuff.

so much abou "deflowering" huh XD
can't wait for the next chapters !

5785969 Whoops! I'll take care of it.

>> EonCrystal What did you think of the other stories, if you don't mind me asking?

I thought it would be better to put said thoughts on their respective story.

I... Actually haven't finished this one... I'll leave a comment when I'm done..

Nice seeing things from the other side

. I don’t why I’m so evil to the poor mare sometimes
I think 'know' is missing.

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Good catch. Thanks!