i think you forgot the chapter title

Undercover nerd Diamond Tiara is cute. This is my new head canon.

5606610 Yeah I don't even wanna go there, it just brings up to much bitterness for me.

I hear that, it really helps to have productive feedback. The problem for me is I get next to nothing at all in the way of feedback, more would help me improve more than I have, and that's what I want to do is get better.

Speaking of which you new chapter has an incomplete title, you need to fix that.

Ok are we gonna some action between Scoots and Sweetie because I would love to see that.

And... and I've been taking those hits for years?! Dear god, I must be near indestructible!

After taking blow after blow, she becomes immortal.
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Huh.

This was an interesting the chapter XD

5607146 thanks for pointing that out
5607578 a thing that I hadn't planned but it also seemed to fit my perception of her as a closet weirdo. I can't wait until AB enters her room
5608092 good to know that I am not alone. I started with just some scraps for my first stories but while I write, i got better as time went on
I fixed the title and there is a bit of one sided love between scoots and sweetie... Let's see where that goes
5609959 (rolls on floor laughing) it has been years since I read that! Never finished but I loved tamago!
5611328 thanks! I live to make people feel things, be it confusion or laughter

5612052 Oh my God, that's going to be fun. She's going to have like EVERY current game console and a few of the retro ones. I love this interpretation of Diamond Tiara.

5613186 It came to me as I wrote and I thought "Diamond's hobbies aren't ever divulged, so that means..."
Then I wrote in Snips and Snails and then this happened:

Everyone in my house (My host's sister, my two best friends who were playing on the Wii, and the sister's friend) stared at me like I'd lost my mind
Then my resulting manic chuckling turning into evil laughter (A habit I can't break) they just decided to let me be me "It's just Midnight being Midnight

5614594 Well, you've gotten me truly intrigued. Normally I don't really go for stories like this, but this one is very fun to read.

I didn't comment on this, but the way you write Diamond's thoughts are genius. That part in the last chapter where she was thinking about Apple Bloom "milking her" I wanted to applaud you for that, because I could perfectly hear her thoughts and what they sounded like. I can tell how desperate Diamond Tiara is without needing to be constantly reminded of it, which leaves more room to develop the character.

I guess what I'm saying is, keep it up.

5614717 Really? I just thought that's how she's think. A frustrated adult with a sudden release of hormones and emotions held back by years of repression and hatred, Like suddenly waking up from a coma and having superpowers.
Confusing from the sudden power you have, Frustrating for all that lost time, Relieving to know that you can change your future with it, and energizing like you can make another person or persons' lives better!
Which is what Diamond was feeling until she finally kissed Applebloom, nothing else mattered, because all of that was set aside for the briefest of moments
... Maybe I am supposed to be a writer, that is inspiring to me!
And all of that right off the top of my head

Still waiting... But one thing I couldn't entirely wrapped up is Scootaloo's behawior. Is she a depraved bisexual or what?

5615095 She is and wait until I get to it! I need time to build up to it!

5612052 Yeah I know what you mean, I've been improving as well.

You need to be a huge pervert or a biologist to learn it

well as for myself 1 out of 2 ain't bad.

The bag moved, one of the titanium chains breaking as it swung, heading towards the girl who punched it again, repeating this for several minutes before another chain snaps, the other two buckling with the weight, bending the steel skeleton with an ear-piercing screech that shatters several windows and glasses

Jesus, if she's that strong, how fucking strong is Big Mac?

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Registered as a force of nature, maybe.