After a fistfight, Diamond Tiara has finally realises that she is madly in love with Applebloom, and wants to make up for all of those years of bullying. Even if it means serving the young Apple
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Oh finally! That sex scene was what I was waiting for, and good GOD was it worth it.
wat a great sex scene
all tht missing is a scootaloo and sweetie belle sex scene....maybe silver spoon and babs.....lol
5966354 ... don't give me more ideas...
5982094 Sorry for the wait
5982829 that might happen... or not, I don't know
5982961 Not it isn't. I sit on the toilets on display with a newspaper (Pants still on) and do the crossword puzzles. Or stand at the sinks with a tooth brush and ask why they aren't working.
5984506 i can wait
Scootaloo needs some sweetie belle if u kno wat i mean
5984515 I think I do...
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You said that diamond wasn't wearing a bra but later applebloom was removing diamond's soaked bra.
5999215 I... Thanks so much, this is embarrassing
While I hate grammar Nazis, I also have to say, there are points that it is impairment that you said the wrong thing. And truth be told, that is a hard thing for me to just shrug off, but I am likely going to feature your story in FoXXXes, under Clop With Plot. Because it does! Which I also thank you for.
PS: I am proud to read this.
~TCF
6050709 Thanks so much for that.
6055313
You deserve it for trying your hardest. in truth, that's all I want to see when a writer's writing new or old.
6055316 That's all I know how to do.
6055332
That and with little mistakes, I don't care about much in writing, as long as it makes sense. You're only human so I;m not all the time impressed with people who flaunting how they know the "proper use of the -" or "the real way to use a ;" I'm not impressed, you show me that despite flaws in your story grammar and time flaws, you can still make a great story. And that's what I'm TRYING to do.
~TCF
6055394 I know, and I accept that I may not be "perfect", I am still halfway decent, and that's more than I could ever hope to be.
6055461
Agreed. You still wrote a hell of a story. Something I'm having trouble doing.
~TCF
6055645 You're making me blush! stoppit!
6055723
Nah. You deserve some praise for your skill.
~TCF
6056382 I have no skill. I'm just lucky that people have low standards and my work, while I hold it precious, is just above those expectations.