After a fistfight, Diamond Tiara has finally realises that she is madly in love with Applebloom, and wants to make up for all of those years of bullying. Even if it means serving the young Apple
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CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHAT THE F&%$ IS GOING ON IN THIS STORY!
I really don't like it when I can't follow what is going on in a story, but I can't stop because I always have some small hope that it will be explained later or I can figure it out my self. For right now I will continue reading this hoping that the crazy train will stop at some point.
YES FINALLY A SCOOTABELLE MOMENT....NEXT UP A SEX SCENE OF SCOOTABELLE.
babs is like i didn't this was kissin party LMFAO it is now lol
5753817 it's like a roller coaster ride in the dark. all you can do is hold on tight, brace yourself, and hope you don't get whiplash.
5753817 That's the beauty of this story in my opinion. How little sense it makes.
As of this line, Silver Spoon is my favorite character in this story. That's something I would say.
5754659 I'm sure stories that are mostly about the "WTF factor" are fun for a lot people, but for myself... they are fun for a while, then just get annoying because there isn't really any real story progression. This is MY opinion, I am in no way criticizing this story. What I really want is for someone to try and explain the plot to me. When I originally started to read this I thought it was just going to be a Applebloom x Diamond Tiara fic, now I don't even know any more. I'm not even sure if MidnightFMare knows.
5754706 I'm sure he knows what he's doing. I want to explain the plot, but the best way to go about it is literally to not think too hard about it. I just take each chapter as a separate story in of itself.
5754719 As an English major, it is very difficult, if not impossible for me to not think about whatever it is that I'm reading. I can't just turn off my brain when something confuses me.
5753787 Popcorn, how do ponies lift it or even shuck corn?
Lyra: Magic
I meant earth ponies
Lyra ... hooves?
Explain how that works
Lyra: MY TINY PONY BRAIN CANNOT UNDERSTAND!! *Falls over, twitching*
5753817 I shall try to, but if Ia m unable to, please do not hate me or anything, but if you should want to ignore this story and myself, thatb is your choice and I can do nothing to dissuade you from that except for the fact that I am trying. Thank you for bringing it to my attention and I shall have an explainatory sub-chapter soon
5753994 to be honest, I was sure that my blog would get me banned so I had worked it into there, as my final update just in case
5753995 I am aware but I am trying my best to reign it in without completely stopping what progression it has or will make, and thanks
5754663 She is kind of my avatar for reigning the story back into a sensible form but as with all characters I write, she gained a life of her own
DT: that's what happens when you have an imagination that could make you a powerful Lantern... you have humility and junk but have no love life, no hope in humanity, a quelled temper, you aren't scary, and you have- That's it! you could be an indigo!
nok, problem there, I am not a criminal and cannot atone for my actions against others
DT: you are a thief
I steal from those whom have wronged me or others
DT: no greediness in that you give away things that you have no use for like a $200 headset to someone whom you barely knew
No one will let me live it down...
DT: ...You are a compromising person so no will power... I got nothing
Hmm... And self loathing personality makes it hard for me to be a white or black one... I'd just go with every power you haven't thought of yet.
DT: You'd be the quiz?
... in essence, yes. Wait, how did you get in here?
DT: Lyra invited me
... nevermind, go home
5755633 that sounds like fun!
5757232 Dude I'm not trying to criticize you or your story, in any way shape or form. I'm just confused as to what is currently happening the story. I really enjoy what I've read so far and I look forward to what is going to happen next. I'm just looking for a little clarity.
Yes babs = sniper from meet the amazing sniper