Ryuu and Q have a long history--spanning some 3000 years. Their last encounter was on a planet called Pern--but that's a story for another place and time. This is their First meeting! And neither was prepared for it happening in Equestria!
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I was really waiting to see how Discord would react. This is hardly what I expected, but I like it!
In looking back, I figured that the "running gag", as you so put, was Stargate SG-1. It almost all added up; secret military space project deep inside a mountain, the "rings", and the ideas on warp drives/ space distance. I was fairly sure, but this last chapter cemented my assumptions, being when you mentioned the 7 characters on the spinning ring. I like it!
Holy shit, Rainbow
Are you okay??
Are you having a stroke?!
Were you electrocuted just before trying to pronounce that word?
Twilight, how the fuck did you decipher that shit?
I’ve ignored it for a bit but now I just can’t. Ever since the fall, Rainbow’s suddenly gained this extremely pronounced accent and it’s honestly grating. Rainbow doesn’t have an accent this bad. Hell, same can be said for how you’ve portrayed AJ at times!
This portrayal of Rarity is just painful, might I add. Destroying clothing off someone for being against her fashion sense, then forcibly holding them as she takes measurements? Honestly I’d accuse her of rape as well if that were me, even if I were a pony!
This story is confusing on the extreme band of the spectrum. Now Discord is scared, and conveniently he can’t say anything. Honestly you’re playing with suspension of disbelief and you’re playing wrong. I can understand having Discord be scared to show something is really, really, REALLY wrong. But then go on to not explain it? To have it be something so insignificant that even the thing he’s scared of doesn’t know why?