I feel so bad for Twilight in this one, not only is her crush one sided, added that Octavia lardy has the DJ of her dreams, she is geeing so worked up over Honeyed Words knowing about her crush.,
5572662 Twilight is in a very bad way in this. I would pay good money to not be in her position.... except for maybe the female part. That sounds like an interesting change.
5568684556932755695765570520 Thank you kindly. 5568988 Technically, it's alchemy, not science, but I like to give all my fantasy a touch of legitimacy. 5569166 Maybe even a guy in a horrible Whinny the Pooh costume could do a little song and dance? 55710515572543 Sorry, I thought I was clear in the first chapter. Twilight's 13, while Octavia is 18. 5572662 C'est la vie.
5585113 Actually, you were not, but I wanted to make sure. Mainly because the anthro tag puts this story at high risk for being reported, if I understand the rules right. I might be wrong, and so, IGNORE ME. But I think underage sex is against site rules for both human AND anthro. Ima go check.
5585233 Not tellin'. 5585266 No worries. No underage anthro sex will be happening here. Fusion Fool showed me where, it's in the rules just before you submit a new story. I just adjusted Octy's age, which was technically close enough, but I went ahead and made her 18 just to be sure.
5585266 Just went backto make sure I had wrote it, and here's what I had written in the first chapter about Twilight:
She was much smaller than the average high school student, but that was only to be expected, being that she was the school's only thirteen year-old senior.
I hope Honey Dip faces the true wrath of a magical flaring Twilight. Turned inside out, unimaginable pain. She will be so damaged, she will spend the rest of her life in a straight jacket.
FOR THE COLD OF HEART DESERVE AN ABSOLUTE ZERO HEART OF PUNISHMENT.
Aw, you didn't use the word squick this time. Oh, well.
I hate the massive repercussions Twilight Sparkle will undoubtedly go through once Honeyed Words manages to get her probably-perfectly-manicured hands on the poor filly, but meanwhile, I enjoyed witnessing the suffering and humiliation the older mare was put through once her "cheat-sheet" was taken away from her.
I think Honey's gonna quickly find out to never push Twilight too far, especially since she's a top tier mage who could turn her and all her friends into decorative shrubberies on a whim
Commence read.
Like the banter with Ms.Crucible. Plus the science of it all.
And Moonday strikes the calendar.
Oh, the anticipation. But once it arrives I am certain it shall be worth it.
Awww, chapter went to fast. But I was very happy just to have the update!
5569166 What's a PCA? I searched it in Google and got several different acronyms.
5569855 ahh, I see
... I just had a mental image of Leonardo telling off some fillies and warning them about the dangers of bulling.
My sides exploded.
Very interesting =()
How old is Twilight here, again?
I need ages! I love this story but i'm constantly confused about how old everypony is.
I feel so bad for Twilight in this one, not only is her crush one sided, added that Octavia lardy has the DJ of her dreams, she is geeing so worked up over Honeyed Words knowing about her crush.,
5572662 Twilight is in a very bad way in this. I would pay good money to not be in her position.... except for maybe the female part. That sounds like an interesting change.
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Thank you kindly.
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Technically, it's alchemy, not science, but I like to give all my fantasy a touch of legitimacy.
5569166
Maybe even a guy in a horrible Whinny the Pooh costume could do a little song and dance?
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Sorry, I thought I was clear in the first chapter. Twilight's 13, while Octavia is 18.
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C'est la vie.
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I intend to, but I'm just taking a quick break to write this one-shot fic in which Twilight fucks... well, I won't spoil it for you.
5585113
Actually, you were not, but I wanted to make sure.
Mainly because the anthro tag puts this story at high risk for being reported, if I understand the rules right. I might be wrong, and so, IGNORE ME. But I think underage sex is against site rules for both human AND anthro.
Ima go check.
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Ooooh?
Follow up.
I have discovered I don't know where to check for story rules.
Blargh.
5585233
Not tellin'.
5585266
No worries. No underage anthro sex will be happening here. Fusion Fool showed me where, it's in the rules just before you submit a new story. I just adjusted Octy's age, which was technically close enough, but I went ahead and made her 18 just to be sure.
5585266
Just went backto make sure I had wrote it, and here's what I had written in the first chapter about Twilight:
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True true.
That is a nice touch.
5585113 thx:) it makes a lot more sense now.
I like it, the young love, the driensgip with spike
I be waiting next update
I hope Honey Dip faces the true wrath of a magical flaring Twilight. Turned inside out, unimaginable pain. She will be so damaged, she will spend the rest of her life in a straight jacket.
FOR THE COLD OF HEART DESERVE AN ABSOLUTE ZERO HEART OF PUNISHMENT.
Next chapter, please.
Aw, you didn't use the word squick this time. Oh, well.
I hate the massive repercussions Twilight Sparkle will undoubtedly go through once Honeyed Words manages to get her probably-perfectly-manicured hands on the poor filly, but meanwhile, I enjoyed witnessing the suffering and humiliation the older mare was put through once her "cheat-sheet" was taken away from her.
5624134 I hope you don't mind if I take that phrase for myself.
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I think Honey's gonna quickly find out to never push Twilight too far, especially since she's a top tier mage who could turn her and all her friends into decorative shrubberies on a whim