This is getting better and better as it goes. And the pizza description. Reminds me of school. Even in equestria they get cardboard pizza and drywall pancakes
Twilight sits fearfully in the seat proffered by Celestia. She takes one look at her student and decides maybe it's time to purge some of the noble houses. Via the sun. Time for some gross incandescence!
Get back here!!!! Also when I read Cadance buying the mini skirt in the store I thought of the wrong Idea and I wanted to flick you on the nose and be like bad author Cadance is with shining not Twi
That was great but still I thought is was a shipping story of Twilight and Octavia Though all I'm seeing is a very disappointed Twilight and heart broken I had to double check to make sure there was no sad tag Though I will remain faithful and I still hope for a Twilight x Octavia x Vinyl ending I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
5956164 Thank you kindly. 5956501 Heh. I've never seen someone try to motorboat a fanfic before. 5956688 Yes, well, I've had bad experiences in the past with trying to conform my stories to reader's expectations. Needless to say; I'm glad this one worked out. 5957543 Thanks. I'll correct it as soon as I find it. 5959289 Sad part is, that was truly the best dish in my school. Give me a couple of those a pint of chocolate milk, and some rolls, and I'm a happy camper. Man, I really miss those rolls. 5959491 Well, the sun is a mass of incandescent gas... 5962072 No worries, Cadance is just a big sister to her and vice versa. I'm more surprised that you didn't think that Cadance and the goth pony were going to get it on. 5966172 Into every life, a little rain must fall. It waters the flowers, after all.
I like Candence all responsible and mature, fearless of confronting Celestia... plust the story itself is soo sweet I think I am going to die of diabetes Please moar!!
Great job, keep up the good work.
I enjoyed this chapter very much.
And the author's note made me laugh.
Commence read.
Now to see how the confrontations go.
Small typo?
Or just a run on ramble of distress?
This is getting better and better as it goes.
And the pizza description. Reminds me of school. Even in equestria they get cardboard pizza and drywall pancakes
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Twilight sits fearfully in the seat proffered by Celestia. She takes one look at her student and decides maybe it's time to purge some of the noble houses.
Via the sun.
Time for some gross incandescence!
Get back here!!!!
Also when I read Cadance buying the mini skirt in the store I thought of the wrong Idea and I wanted to flick you on the nose and be like bad author Cadance is with shining not Twi
That was great but still I thought is was a shipping story of Twilight and Octavia Though all I'm seeing is a very disappointed Twilight and heart broken I had to double check to make sure there was no sad tag Though I will remain faithful and I still hope for a Twilight x Octavia x Vinyl ending I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
5956164
Thank you kindly.
5956501
Heh. I've never seen someone try to motorboat a fanfic before.
5956688
Yes, well, I've had bad experiences in the past with trying to conform my stories to reader's expectations. Needless to say; I'm glad this one worked out.
5957543
Thanks. I'll correct it as soon as I find it.
5959289
Sad part is, that was truly the best dish in my school. Give me a couple of those a pint of chocolate milk, and some rolls, and I'm a happy camper. Man, I really miss those rolls.
5959491
Well, the sun is a mass of incandescent gas...
5962072
No worries, Cadance is just a big sister to her and vice versa. I'm more surprised that you didn't think that Cadance and the goth pony were going to get it on.
5966172
Into every life, a little rain must fall. It waters the flowers, after all.
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Are you sure about that Solaire?
She might you know...
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Poketax:
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I enjoy these Solaire images way too much.
I like Candence all responsible and mature, fearless of confronting Celestia...
plust the story itself is soo sweet I think I am going to die of diabetes
Please moar!!
Gothic ponies. It's like My Little Pony meets Monster High.