Noooo! Not the octy vinyl relationship. Now I need to hold my kitty till the next chapter. Also I thought this was the end intill I read the author note. Than I was like nope just a sad chapter. 6061429 I know how you feel but just let it out. Just let it out.
Now, now Celestia. Let's not be too modest. Even a mediocre harpist is possessed of considerable skill, considering how challenging the harp is to play. And you have had significantly more time to pursue a hobby than any professional.
Well I figured there had to be a time skip since all chapters have felt like they lay the foundation and background for Twi's shot at romance. Depending on how much canon is kept (being an AU, and being set in pre-episode schooling makes it hard to guess) I suppose it at the very least has to be after Octavia graduates from post-secondary. She's shooting for the Canterlot Philharmonic Orchestra, so she's bound to pop up back there. Their first canon 'reunion' would be around the gala, although before that is possible (considering the main focus characters being Twi, Celestia, Octi, and Vinyl, it's unlikely to be that point in time). Then there's the timeframe in the recent background pony episode, but that pushes into Princess Twilight territory. Maybe Octavia starts to admire a certain purple princess by that point
(Personally I'm guessing post highschool, keeping it in Canterlot, with more secret agent shenanigans)
Another clue was that, for Twi to have the courage to confess if for Octavia and Vinyl to breakup. For Octavia to even consider Twilight in a romantic light, we're going to need an older, more mature Twi. No longer just Octavia's student or just a friend, but equals who are geniuses in their fields
I'm liking all the musical chapter titles (especially how they hint at the feel of that chapter), the puns, the character interactions, the secret defend-Twilight-brigade... It's all coming together nicely.
I've noticed a couple missing punctuation and small stuff but that's alright.
6012277 Thank you kindly. Glad you liked it. 606142960618986062287 Achievement Unlocked: Right in the Feels. 6061600 I promise nothing, so you won't be disappointed should the desired outcome not happen. 6062089 This guy gets it. 6062300 Well, she's also realistic about how much time she can spend with her favorite filly. 6062455 You'll have to wait and see. 6064152 It happens. 6066636 I'm glad someone out there appreciates how hard it is to find a musical term that matches the feel/theme of the chapter and gets their meanings. Luckily, Wiki has a list, but it's so large, that it's easy to just use the first third or so and forget the rest. My middle school band experience can only take me so far in that regard.
That was a interesting chapter I'm still hoping for a Twilight/Octavia/Vinyl three way I'm not surprised at the soon to be time jump I can see why it has to happen to bring Octavia and Twilight together. I have a feeling the first time Octavia and Twilight will even come together will be the Gala. From there I think Octavia and Twilight will start to get together and that is because of how Twilight changed and all of her friends she met in Ponyville I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
6338797 Thanks for your concern. Everything is fine, it's just that work has been really weird, and... well, I'll explain when I post the next chappie. It shouldn't be too long, I think I've almost reached a good stopping point for it.
... nnnnnnnnnnnnn NO!
I don't care what you write! You can't have my tears! I'm not crying!
I'm not — I'm not crying.....
Nnnnnnnn —
WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Good chapter, even though you do keep teasing an Octavia / Vinyl / Twilight threesome and it never happens.
Noooo! Not the octy vinyl relationship. Now I need to hold my kitty till the next chapter. Also I thought this was the end intill I read the author note. Than I was like nope just a sad chapter.
6061429 I know how you feel but just let it out. Just let it out.
You made water come outta my eyes.
Now, now Celestia. Let's not be too modest. Even a mediocre harpist is possessed of considerable skill, considering how challenging the harp is to play. And you have had significantly more time to pursue a hobby than any professional.
6061600
Hope springs eternal...
So, seeing as this is set in the past, how will these three react when they meet up again in Ponyville?
Commence read.
Looks like Twilight still has to find out things.
Sadly they separate.
Well I figured there had to be a time skip since all chapters have felt like they lay the foundation and background for Twi's shot at romance. Depending on how much canon is kept (being an AU, and being set in pre-episode schooling makes it hard to guess) I suppose it at the very least has to be after Octavia graduates from post-secondary. She's shooting for the Canterlot Philharmonic Orchestra, so she's bound to pop up back there.
Their first canon 'reunion' would be around the gala, although before that is possible (considering the main focus characters being Twi, Celestia, Octi, and Vinyl, it's unlikely to be that point in time). Then there's the timeframe in the recent background pony episode, but that pushes into Princess Twilight territory. Maybe Octavia starts to admire a certain purple princess by that point
(Personally I'm guessing post highschool, keeping it in Canterlot, with more secret agent shenanigans)
Another clue was that, for Twi to have the courage to confess if for Octavia and Vinyl to breakup. For Octavia to even consider Twilight in a romantic light, we're going to need an older, more mature Twi. No longer just Octavia's student or just a friend, but equals who are geniuses in their fields
I'm liking all the musical chapter titles (especially how they hint at the feel of that chapter), the puns, the character interactions, the secret defend-Twilight-brigade... It's all coming together nicely.
I've noticed a couple missing punctuation and small stuff but that's alright.
Anyways, looking foward to more Wrabbit Writings
6012277
Thank you kindly. Glad you liked it.
6061429 6061898 6062287
Achievement Unlocked: Right in the Feels.
6061600
I promise nothing, so you won't be disappointed should the desired outcome not happen.
6062089
This guy gets it.
6062300
Well, she's also realistic about how much time she can spend with her favorite filly.
6062455
You'll have to wait and see.
6064152
It happens.
6066636
I'm glad someone out there appreciates how hard it is to find a musical term that matches the feel/theme of the chapter and gets their meanings. Luckily, Wiki has a list, but it's so large, that it's easy to just use the first third or so and forget the rest. My middle school band experience can only take me so far in that regard.
That was a interesting chapter I'm still hoping for a Twilight/Octavia/Vinyl three way I'm not surprised at the soon to be time jump I can see why it has to happen to bring Octavia and Twilight together. I have a feeling the first time Octavia and Twilight will even come together will be the Gala. From there I think Octavia and Twilight will start to get together and that is because of how Twilight changed and all of her friends she met in Ponyville I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
Godsdammit, man. That was painful.
But so, so good.
Dear Wrabbit,
I miss your horse-words. Hope everything is well.
6338797
Thanks for your concern. Everything is fine, it's just that work has been really weird, and... well, I'll explain when I post the next chappie. It shouldn't be too long, I think I've almost reached a good stopping point for it.
Long-distance relationships are a nightmare, I hear. I wouldn't know, I've never been in one.
A relationship, I mean. lol