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::shrugs:: I like it.
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Too late.
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Heh heh.
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You are welcome.
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Thank you kindly.
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Windsday is only the beginning! Just wait until Satyrday! No, really, that's what I'm going with.
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Considering there is nor France in Equiis (and Prench sounds odd),I went with Fancy.
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I'll do my best.
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I'm glad someone caught that Vivid Alder. Shaky Spear is kinda obvs, but not many know the great baroque composers these days.
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That too. I hope the sex this chappie shows the main reason.
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Mmmaaayyybe.
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Patience, Grasshopper; patience.
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Nah, Vinyl is much too laid back to be evil. Also, glad you liked Plain Sight's return. You're the first to mention her.

Commence read.

For some reason I was expecting someone to catch Octavia and Vinyl.

Sadly Spike can't be confided in, it seems. Twilight still needing to work on the feelings.

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Am okay with this.

Well done once again.

A great sigh escaped the filly as she stood and started carefully putting her books away into her bag properly. “I suppose I do. Thanks, Mrs. Nib. I've got to go, but I'll be back this Satyrday to see if the pen I ordered came in. Bye!”

Satyrday

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That.....that was good.

Oh Octy, you naughty girl you.

Conflict, I already thought you had set up conflict with the fact that Twilight was pining for Octavia and she was already in a relationship with Vinyl. Now your throwing this conflict at us, dear god this is going to be a cluster fuck......no pun intended.

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Them getting caught is not in the cards... yet.
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I'unno. Have you taken your meds?
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Thank you kindly.
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It's always the repressed ones, huh?
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No cluster fuck; just the regular kind.

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Dun dun dunnnnnn. The suspense, at some possible point!

Mr. Wrabbit, you did extremely well with Goldn Bit; the only gripe I had was that Blueblood never did figure out that his dad was involved with the whole attempt on Spitfire. In any case, don't sell yourself short; political intrigues are hard to write at the best of times.

From what i read so far, i am inclined to think that this is going to be an OctaScratch fic with one-sided TwiTavia. But that could change later on; either way im going to continue to read this story as it is very well written

You used the word squick again. I swear, if you used that word at least once in every chapter...

Either way, this is too awesome. This may be my new favorite story.