Rainbow Dash is kidnapped, then rescued by a gang of criminals. Stripped of her wing strength, she finds sanctuary among the Payday Crew. (Season One finished; stay tuned!)
5245384 True, but you should probably have at least one small scene that shows what went on, it makes the flow of the story a bit smoother and can help you to make easy transitions from time frame to time frame. Just some tips, the story is still great.
Hmm wonder what might happen next?
This was a good chapter but it felt like some unshown stuff happened with RD in Dallas's house in between chapters.
5245162 What's to tell? They hung out. Not everything has to be significant.
5245384 True, but you should probably have at least one small scene that shows what went on, it makes the flow of the story a bit smoother and can help you to make easy transitions from time frame to time frame. Just some tips, the story is still great.
PAYDAY!!!!! I GOTTA READ THIS!!
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What?!