Rainbow Dash is kidnapped, then rescued by a gang of criminals. Stripped of her wing strength, she finds sanctuary among the Payday Crew. (Season One finished; stay tuned!)
5838698 Sorry if you thought that I was insulting you, I was just letting you know that, it was a unreferenced similarity in-game that they could have capitalized on.
5860256 No. I left him behind in Miami because I didn't want any non-PCs getting involved. Then they started adding more PCs and I've got an idea of how I can introduce them, but for now, Jacket is probably staying in Miami and getting a movie made about him.
Hm... Now this is indeed a good story I have really enjoyed reading so far... but now I can't wait to see how the crew gets Hoxton out of jail. And perhaps see how well Rainbow reacts to it.
I'm wondering if we'll be adding the rest of the new crew? Houston, Jacket, Wick, Bonnie, Clover, and Dragan.. Or are they all waiting in the wings? Ba dum tish!
>Houston is the current Hoxton; will become Houston once old Hoxton gets broken out. >Wick and Jacket appeared in the Hotline Miami two-parter, before Jacket was actually in the game. Jacket is not likely to appear again. Wick, you'll have to see. >I don't know Bonnie, Clover or Dragan as well as the main four (plus Houston), so we'll have to see about that after the breakout.
6185916 The trailer gave me the impression that he's the kind of guy who could know stuff like that. And there is a reason for it. I do have a plot outline in mind, but I keep getting distracted.
6196377 Stuff's been going on and it's been a little difficult to write lately. Besides uni work, my sister's SO is laid up over here after an operation. I know I'm running on Valve time right now, but I'll update as soon as I can. Last time I made a promise, I got run over by a Cloaker for it.
Well damn, this is the first fic I've read in years. And it's great. Keep up the good work. Also, currently seeking an editor? I might able to help with that, if you specify what you need help editing.
6214512 Mostly just proofreading; making sure that I don't leave any spelling or continuity errors in. I've had trouble with stuff like that before, and I don't have anyone to consistently check over my work. I'll PM you when I've got the next chapter drafted.
Rainbow trotted off back to the van, unable to speak her last thought out loud. ...And I don’t know for sure whether that’s entirely a bad thing anymore.
It's not. What do you think Twilight and the princesses do? Or their guards!?
You should have had one of them comment on how similar the plan B is to the Bridge mission in the first game.
5837696 I haven't played the first game as much, so I wasn't aware of the similarity.
5838604 Its literaly the same extract method, first a prisoner, now loot bags.
5838607 I HAVE NOT PLAYED THE FIRST GAME, AND DID NOT KNOW OF IT.
5838698 Sorry if you thought that I was insulting you, I was just letting you know that, it was a unreferenced similarity in-game that they could have capitalized on.
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You should play through the first game, or at least watch the game getting played, get some references from that in here.
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I'll keep an eye out for it, I guess.
That Hotline Miami call was pure genius
Hes now a playable character oooohhhh... I cant wait for Jacket to be reintroduced to the story
Ps' Did you predict Jacket being playable
5860256 No. I left him behind in Miami because I didn't want any non-PCs getting involved. Then they started adding more PCs and I've got an idea of how I can introduce them, but for now, Jacket is probably staying in Miami and getting a movie made about him.
5867332 Check the dates; that chapter was written before Jacket was playable.
Hm... Now this is indeed a good story I have really enjoyed reading so far... but now I can't wait to see how the crew gets Hoxton out of jail. And perhaps see how well Rainbow reacts to it.
Every new chapter makes me want to add another favoruite but i cant
I'm wondering if we'll be adding the rest of the new crew? Houston, Jacket, Wick, Bonnie, Clover, and Dragan.. Or are they all waiting in the wings? Ba dum tish!
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>Houston is the current Hoxton; will become Houston once old Hoxton gets broken out.
>Wick and Jacket appeared in the Hotline Miami two-parter, before Jacket was actually in the game. Jacket is not likely to appear again. Wick, you'll have to see.
>I don't know Bonnie, Clover or Dragan as well as the main four (plus Houston), so we'll have to see about that after the breakout.
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6185916 The trailer gave me the impression that he's the kind of guy who could know stuff like that. And there is a reason for it. I do have a plot outline in mind, but I keep getting distracted.
When will the next update be?
6196377 Stuff's been going on and it's been a little difficult to write lately. Besides uni work, my sister's SO is laid up over here after an operation. I know I'm running on Valve time right now, but I'll update as soon as I can. Last time I made a promise, I got run over by a Cloaker for it.
Well damn, this is the first fic I've read in years. And it's great.
Keep up the good work.
Also, currently seeking an editor? I might able to help with that, if you specify what you need help editing.
6214512 Mostly just proofreading; making sure that I don't leave any spelling or continuity errors in. I've had trouble with stuff like that before, and I don't have anyone to consistently check over my work. I'll PM you when I've got the next chapter drafted.
6215148 Righto, glad to hear it.
KEEP THE GRAVY TRAIN ROLLING
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You actually took that corny call idea? Thanks for taking it, then.
And now for the obligatory "YAY, an update!"
Yay!New update!
It's not. What do you think Twilight and the princesses do? Or their guards!?