Gilda gets kicked out of her home after it turns out that ponies totally do count for griffon life-bonds. She goes crawling back to Dash, and is willing to do almost anything to get back on her good side.
,,,, Ohhhh. I just figured something out. Gilda was taught that ponies don't count when it comes to life mates, so Dash's cutie mark should not have shown up...
BUT
If Dash had some, even minor, griffon/hippogriff linage, it would explain how the magic worked AND Dash's craving for chicken salad.
Mmmmmm.... chicken salad... with walnuts, mayo, dill, and dried cranberries.
I think the rule is based on the magic, and if Dash has some griffon blood in her family then the life mate magic probably reacted to it. What if Dash is a better flyer than other pegasi because some underlying griffon genetics gives her an edge?
Could have done without the Futa or, for that matter the (shameless) clop altogether, but hey, its GILDASH, so that's an automatic read, and the plot is interesting and potentially cute.
Have my upvote and fave, lets see where this is going
Good chapter! But, I suggest you go back and state their current age or at least what year of school their in or theirs body sizes. We can guess, but we shouldn't have to, especially when there's sex involve. Makes it harder to visualize!
Griffons may mate for life, but they're only the second-best lovers in the world! The hedgehog, widely regarded as Equestria's (and the planet's) best lover in all existence, mates not for life, but for death. Which may not make sense. Unless you've been fucked by a hedgehog.
well seeing as how this is Equestria and they always seemed a more mid-evil society to me, I would imagine the age of mating would be around oh....15, maybe younger. All in all, I have no problems with this at all.
I know Dash likes to go fast, but for a story that seems to be plot-focused, that was a pretty quick jump from hanging out to having sex. I'd be caught a bit off-guard if I gave someone the equivalent of a massage and they had an orgasm from it.
5022577 Its time like these I ask myself questions like: If friendship is magic, what is love/lust? Who took the cookie from the cookie jar? What if all the insane people are just the only people who can see the world as it really is? Has science gone too far? Ooh! A shiny thing!
well now, this was posted and everything on my birthday. took me a bit to get to it, but i got it... and dang is it a good story so far. gildadash is a little rare for me, but enjoyable. hope to see more
This actually seems really nice so far. It's hardly as pointless as you make it out to be (and the clop is nice). Looking forward to the next chapters.
5094988 Yup. There's actually been a book written studying the occurrence. http://www.lrgaf.org/deadly_equines.htm In fact, you've probably already heard about it. Remember the twelve tasks of Hercules? One of which was to face the four man-eating horses a local king owned and defeat them without killing them?
5094992 Sorry, bud, but ponies are a breed of horses, just like chihuahuas are a breed of dogs. They are perfectly capable of consuming and digesting meat. Mind you, that doesn't mean there aren't social taboos on it, like how some cultures frown on eating bugs. My point is that there's nothing biologically preventing Dash from eating meat, just the opinions of the ponies around her. And clearly Dash is not the type to give a buck about acting "proper."
Aside from the clop (just not a fan of it) this was okay. Look forward to the next chapter.
Favourited for now.
Hey, this is a Fic with clop. I reserve the right to unfavourite if it becomes too much about the clop (though from what I've seen, that isn't going to b a problem).
Fuck me, maybe I'm being a bit dramatic but this was the first clopic I didn't feel the least bit dirty after reading. The characters are just so well explored and the feelings so genuine, it felt more sweet than sexy. Either way I'm very pleased, excellent story so far!
Though not a fan of clop (mostly) the actual plot here is interesting. Can't wait to see what future Dash will do.
Well past Dash has been screwed and now future Gilda is tattoo'd!
Haha! Dash just made a huge mistake. Better get ready to wear that ring, Dash. Gilda wasn't kidding when she said mate for life.
Bucking all the live long day.
Does that mean Scootaloo has a griffin for an aunt?
I'm a fan of a good warning label. It doesn't warrant an auto-fave, but it does mean you have my attention.
Tracking for the concept, the content and the Chapter names... the chapter names made me laugh quite hard.
I give this a like only because I really like the concept. But ... futa. No thanks!
Almost perfect idea though, again, thumbs up for that!
5018675 That's future rainbow dash's problem!
,,,, Ohhhh. I just figured something out. Gilda was taught that ponies don't count when it comes to life mates, so Dash's cutie mark should not have shown up...
BUT
If Dash had some, even minor, griffon/hippogriff linage, it would explain how the magic worked AND Dash's craving for chicken salad.
Mmmmmm.... chicken salad... with walnuts, mayo, dill, and dried cranberries.
5020721 Hmmm...But how would that happen, since ponies don't count in the first place? Did that rule come up afterwards?
5020786
I think the rule is based on the magic, and if Dash has some griffon blood in her family then the life mate magic probably reacted to it. What if Dash is a better flyer than other pegasi because some underlying griffon genetics gives her an edge?
Could have done without the Futa or, for that matter the (shameless) clop altogether, but hey, its GILDASH, so that's an automatic read, and the plot is interesting and potentially cute.
Have my upvote and fave, lets see where this is going
Good chapter! But, I suggest you go back and state their current age or at least what year of school their in or theirs body sizes.
We can guess, but we shouldn't have to, especially when there's sex involve.
Makes it harder to visualize!
5020576
You know what else might become future Dash's problem? A bun in the oven.
Griffons may mate for life, but they're only the second-best lovers in the world! The hedgehog, widely regarded as Equestria's (and the planet's) best lover in all existence, mates not for life, but for death. Which may not make sense. Unless you've been fucked by a hedgehog.
i.imgur.com/D1sE2ta.png
5021949 can I have some of that popcorn?
well seeing as how this is Equestria and they always seemed a more mid-evil society to me, I would imagine the age of mating would be around oh....15, maybe younger. All in all, I have no problems with this at all.
Also, poor poor future Dash.
I know Dash likes to go fast, but for a story that seems to be plot-focused, that was a pretty quick jump from hanging out to having sex. I'd be caught a bit off-guard if I gave someone the equivalent of a massage and they had an orgasm from it.
5022309 First bring me your first born.
Or a coconut.
5022577 Its time like these I ask myself questions like:
If friendship is magic, what is love/lust?
Who took the cookie from the cookie jar?
What if all the insane people are just the only people who can see the world as it really is?
Has science gone too far?
Ooh! A shiny thing!
...
You have my attention.
5022972 Coconut it is.
5023201
Science
Cookie Monster
Doi...
No
Yes
5024110 ....Well?
5023201 The answers are all the same. And it's so simple too! The answer is - ooh shiny.
5023201 Shiny objects all the way
~No.
I do hope more of this happens.
5024320 Shiny object is love. Shiny object is-
HOLY CRAP ITS A SWORD!
5024180 *Bestows Coconut*
5025271 *Bestows popcorn*
I'm actually really interested in the worldbuilding you're doing here surrounding gryphon society. Keep up the interesting work!
well now, this was posted and everything on my birthday. took me a bit to get to it, but i got it... and dang is it a good story so far. gildadash is a little rare for me, but enjoyable. hope to see more
This actually seems really nice so far. It's hardly as pointless as you make it out to be (and the clop is nice). Looking forward to the next chapters.
Hmm...
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Yeah okay I'll favorite.
The bird jokes.........The bird jokes!!! They are endless!
What I thought of...
15 aint late teens but whatever
5094988
Yup. There's actually been a book written studying the occurrence.
http://www.lrgaf.org/deadly_equines.htm
In fact, you've probably already heard about it. Remember the twelve tasks of Hercules? One of which was to face the four man-eating horses a local king owned and defeat them without killing them?
5094992
Sorry, bud, but ponies are a breed of horses, just like chihuahuas are a breed of dogs. They are perfectly capable of consuming and digesting meat.
Mind you, that doesn't mean there aren't social taboos on it, like how some cultures frown on eating bugs. My point is that there's nothing biologically preventing Dash from eating meat, just the opinions of the ponies around her. And clearly Dash is not the type to give a buck about acting "proper."
Aside from the clop (just not a fan of it) this was okay. Look forward to the next chapter.
Favourited for now.
Hey, this is a Fic with clop. I reserve the right to unfavourite if it becomes too much about the clop (though from what I've seen, that isn't going to b a problem).
5025090 It's quite Hawkward isn't it? I need to see more of this fic...
Unf, barbed dick <3
Fuck me, maybe I'm being a bit dramatic but this was the first clopic I didn't feel the least bit dirty after reading. The characters are just so well explored and the feelings so genuine, it felt more sweet than sexy. Either way I'm very pleased, excellent story so far!
5813619
I can follow that. I like where a piece of work can make sex natural instead of glorified porn. Well that's my sight.