Noble and wealthy, that is commonly seen about a pony that lives in Canterlot, but for Cadance it is not what she wants. Her prince is all but a dream, until she is saved by a creature that is savage, mute, and uncouth, but kind, gentle, and caring.
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Sense when can he do that with his hair?
Eh, the total vengeful/evil/hateful-for-no-real-good-reason jerk is a bit cliché... I mean a lot cliché. And makes me feel angry when I don't want you to make me feel angry. As long as you don't linger on it, I'll be fine.
I didn't realize Dragomir had to kick a sucker punching bitch today. 10/10. hope to read more soon dude.
I would join, but I have a PS4. I don't dislike the Xbox 360 or the Xbox One, I just made made my choice when the time came and most of my friends have PSN accounts.
Whoa, whoa, whoa. We don't need a peek into your sex life. Okay?
Oh the romance is adorable and not only that I really enjoy how you made them enemies first and not rushing the romance part dropping seeds here and there and keeping the romance real. The action scene would be interesting and I can't wait for how it will play out. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.
If Dragomir doesn't kill him, his parents will.
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Sorry, I blame the medication in my system.
I WANT MOAR!!!!!! Out of all like 1500 stories I have read on here I look forward to this updating the most. Keep it up. Also what platform for cod.
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Xbox One
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He's been able to manipulateh is hair since chapter one.
It's not an alicorn thing, but a way for him to release his constant growth of magic so it does not hurt or kill him.
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I'm a bit bewildered by your statement. Could you clarify on what you mean to my cliche', please?
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I need to reread then.
6317785 Dang Not really into consoles. wish they would do a cross platform game. I have way to much already invested into my pc.
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I've seen it in Misunderstandings with the character Big Top who was psychotic, vengevul, selfish and brutally sadistic, who inflicted an irreversable injury on the main character before he was killed; I've seen a thestral on drugs in "When the Snow Melts" who disobeyed his superior officer and started killing and eating humans randomly out of bloodlust and made himself look like a god in his plans of murdering Celestia against NMM's wishes. Chrysalis is often made to be like this too in many fics.
Perhaps cliché isn't the right word for it, but the unreasonable, possibly over-powered, sadistic, and having no real reason to kill & main characters the reader already likes is kinda frustrating. For me, at least. The only exception I've seen is Maleficent in Disney's Sleeping Beauty because she's so entertaining.
Like the development and how stoic Dragomir comes across.
Also nice to see that he isn't completely mute. Stories like that are very difficult to keep my attention in.
Well imma fave, like and all that jazz. Eager for the next chapter.
is the main character mute or something? coz im confused!
errr no please don't do that, I don't want to think that he already loves her out of nowhere.
okay not sure if that just sounded bit sappy to me, or if it was because the first way to talk, was him using the mind thing.
sooo he can use his hair? meeehr still like this story, after all I played Shantae and watched Naruto a bit, so I can't complain about that.
He finally speaks, hazza.
Good cosplay in the bedroom... Little bit too much info