Noble and wealthy, that is commonly seen about a pony that lives in Canterlot, but for Cadance it is not what she wants. Her prince is all but a dream, until she is saved by a creature that is savage, mute, and uncouth, but kind, gentle, and caring.
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You have a few issues laying around. May wanna give it another look over.
Dragmir's mom sounds terrifying in the new chapter. Hope he gets to the castle before all hell of every kind breaks loose.
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Issues?
Hahahahaaaa the two dragons at the end made it the perfect chapter ending.
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A few grammatical errors, like
I saw a few more but i forgot to mark them down.
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Ah, I see them now. Dang it. I should have waited until tomorrow to upload this; that way I am notso tired when editing my own work.
Cadance was a real bitch this chapter, has she never studied ANY animal EVER?!
6244690 clearly she knows nothing of the dovh.
6254976 HAHAHAHA!!!
6255323 was it something i said?
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Clearly there will be moments of Cadence being a teenager and not a perfect mare she is written as in most stories.
Hint: Much more surreal perspective of everyday life having its ups and downs.
6257684 give her a potato she will feel better trust me i'm miraak.
Never. Mess. With Mommy!
Cadence, you don't think things through very well, do you? Dragon scales? Scruff of neck? A large number of vertebrates carry their young like that, including canines and felines? I swear, it's like you either don't think, or you're willfully ignorant...
poor Fleur.
No honestly, why did he had to get Fleur? I'm not the biggest prince Chaming...I mean prince Shining fan.
Lol mama's callin.
This story makes Dragomir's animal behavior strange, I really didn't expect it, but the story is good, even Dragomir's behavior can be explained scientifically, since there are and there were people like that in real life.
Dragomir could be a prehistoric human because of his behavior and primitive reasoning.
It could also be a human with severe cognitive disability, a very, very rare mental disorder in which people have an IQ equal to or less than 20 really low, which causes the person can not learn to read, write, or communicate in addition of presenting an emotional handling and behavior equivalent to an animal or a baby throughout life, depending on the severity. In my opinion, this is the option that convinces me the most, considering the animal tendencies and Dragomir's abilities, regardless of their dragon part, and also that in the real world these people are called vulgar savages.
I really tell you, do not be offended by the offensive comments towards your story, it is not worth it, since Dragomir's characteristics have an explanation, in addition to that returning to your original story, although I am not sure if someone normal could relate With such a person.
Wow, turn down the bitch-o-meter a bit cadence. Any higher and you're going to make Amy shumer Look like a saint in comparison.