Noble and wealthy, that is commonly seen about a pony that lives in Canterlot, but for Cadance it is not what she wants. Her prince is all but a dream, until she is saved by a creature that is savage, mute, and uncouth, but kind, gentle, and caring.
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nice very nice
neat little chapter but next time use some sort of break when you change character focus or POV. it was really confusing to go from that bit in the beginning to the part with Ember Dust to the scene at the door.
Foolish woman, you expect her to do anything for you when you just insulted her integrity to her face?
Submit to the love ...don't try to fight it
Fav part..
...but to get an allowance of a thousand with some jewels was overboard. It was not right. It wasn't fair. She wanted a huge allowance too!...
Damn cadence is a gold digger
6875832 but she ain't messing with no broke Ninja.
Dear god dragon boy over hear is more adorable than a puppy and kitten sleeping in the same basket.
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(Buzzer) Wrong.
To be honest I never had epected a that large part of "Dragon town" in the story, and thought they would already help Cadance back, but I like it.
I don't know if it is because of the destiny stuff I still have in mind, or that he seems to be in love with her, and she barely thought about it.
At least in every story I read it is usually the boy or to be more accurate, the main Char that would be the one acting weird round the topic of love. Well he is at least one main Char so it isn't completely wrong, and it kind of seems like he would kind of be forced to feel strong emotions that wouldn't make it so difficult for him, like they do for Cadance.
I hope that makes sense, I don't know how to say it otherwise right now, and I got in a slightly bad mood because of my family.
Long story short, a part of me is happy with the romance, but another part doesn't likes it that it looks like they would be kind of forced to act like that.
This story is so good...it sucks that currently it's dead
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It’s alive again. I’ve been posting more chapters for my other stories on my return last week. This is next.