Noble and wealthy, that is commonly seen about a pony that lives in Canterlot, but for Cadance it is not what she wants. Her prince is all but a dream, until she is saved by a creature that is savage, mute, and uncouth, but kind, gentle, and caring.
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Loved this chapter and the light hearted feel. A bit more progression on their relationship and hints for the future.
It feels like there is still quite a ways to go, and I'm loving every bit.
7803913 Me too.
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Yeah, that's not a reference to love. I'm going to fix the end of that chapter right now.
7803939 Good choice of music though.
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It's more like how they first met. How something starts between the two of them.
"Remember the day I set you free? I told you could always count on me."
I guess I meant the place of the quote to like from the movie after he read the note leaving himself to his thoughts while listening to the song.
7803957 At least I nailed that.
I know she is just having fun and this time it actually looks pretty good, but normally I don't like someone to be manipulated otherwise.
Okay now I have to ask, is this always meant sexually, or is this actually just a gesture to well make him react towards her provokation? (to say it with another word)
I just want to understand some english meanings a bit better.
I kind of forgot about everything that looked like his father wanted to force them together because of his pride and stuff like that and managed to judge the chapter for itself.
Despite every other little problem that I talked about so far, I couldn't really hate it even if it is something that I normally don't like, It kind of feels right this time.
However I hope that he has his moments where he can shine and Cadance needs his help. I don't only want it to look like she would completely control him and manipulate him with her good looks. (like it always happens in at least the Equestria girls "Rarity" storys).
I don't need him to be a macho, but I kind of want a balance in their relationship.
Damn this is good, can't wait for the next chapters.