Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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This sounds like a euphemism.
Oh I hope it's the batfilly. Changeling colts are evil.
...Okay fine I may be somewhat biased in favor of fillies in all cases... Okay a lot biased.
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Hmmm i can´t say that i would hate one of them, but i think i would vote for the Changeling, mostly because i already wanted a Baby Changeling story from another author, but he/her takes his time, or just don´t write it, but he/she wanted to do it.
However, i guess it would be nice if they would have both of them, it would be nice to add two children to the story.
I can´t decide which one of them should be fond of with Mom, but i guess i would like it if the Changeling would like Trixie a little bit more, and the Filly would like Spitfire more, because Trixie said she was more wild, and i think i remember it is often that way, that daugthers like their father more, and the son likes the mother more.
I just heard it would be that way.
Nice chapter, i hope they adopt them soon, i would like to read about them. Please make at least one of them some kind of problem child, or a shy one. Once in a while if you don´t feel like writing anything special, you could make a Bonus Chapter with the childs, they could visit a new school or anything like that.
I forgot what i wanted to write, so i just say good work.
Pretty good chapter. I hope we get introduced to thr kids soon
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Glad you liked it. I was worried it was over winded and lengthy.
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There will be children soon but who shall Trixie get? Will it be one of the two, both, neither? Maybe she'll find someone else?
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Sorry I'm not that clever. Besides this isn't bestiality. Sick bastard.
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Colt hater! You made everyling very sad today.
5734291 you're not even close to to long
When did this start to become a regular thing? The only instance where Trixie had a nightmare at all was when she woke upon the hospital after she was attacked. Every other time she has slept or dreamed before or afterwards was described as peaceful, had good dreams, or the quality just wasn't mentioned. However, the text in this chapter makes it seem like her having violent nightmares is a regular occurrence.
Okay now onto the adoption subplot that I am currently having some gripes with. This is a completed story so these concerns might be naturally addressed by the story in later chapters, but I'm going to air my grievances now and hope to be answered by the story.
I know you explained Trixie's eagerness with wanting to adopt by her being adopted herself, but it seems like the two have switched the roles they should've had from the start. It's just that it has reached the point where Trixie seems to have forgotten the rather sensible rule about waiting a year to adopt only two weeks and three days after she made it. Who knows, maybe sex wasn't the only thing Spitfire rushed into after her fight with that dragon and now that she has settled down and thought about it she is having cold hooves about it.
Like I said earlier, I know the story is complete and that it could be that I just haven't gotten to the part that explains the adoption attitude inconsistencies. If that's the case, then I'm sorry for bothering you about that part, but I feel like the nightmare situation needs to be examined.