Twilight
It had only been a few minutes since Twilight Sparkle and her Spike made their way back to her house, where she quickly gathered quills and parchment. "Spike! Can you come here, I need to..."
"Run a few tests? I'm already working on one." He replied from the other room.
This caused Twilight to ponder what was happening, so she made her way over to Spike. "Wh...What are you testing?"
"I'm running a few tests on my physical form." He said while looking through Twilights microscope. "I'm seeing if there is any tangible differences between the orginal me and me, I can't very well test my psychological state."
"Well...yes...that is true..." she replied after a pause. "So what have you found out?"
"Actually, based on the scales I found in my bed I have found that my color has indeed altered slightly, aproximately 2% closer in color to your own coat Twilight, but other than that there appears to be no discernable difference."
"Did you take into account the natural color alteration in scale decay?"
"Yes, I have. So what about you?"
"What about me?"
"Have you found anything? Or are you still preparing your tests?"
"I was preparing to preform a psychological test on you...not neccessarily your memory but your..."
"Attitude and personality? Good idea!"
"Well first, if you don't mind me saying, you seem to be a lot more intellegent than you used to be."
"Everyone is a genious but if you judge a fish by it's ability to climb a tree it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid." Spike quoted, giving a playful chuckle towards her.
"Th-That is very true Spike, who said that?"
"A pony by the name of Albert Equinstien"
"Isn't that one of the ponies responsible for the Manehatten project?"
"That's not the only thing he did... but we're getting off focus."
"You're right." Twilight coughed, "shall we begin the personality test?"
"I'm ready when you are."
"Alright! Question one: Where do you feel you would want to spend your leasure time?"
"In a library, if we didn't already live in one."
"That's...What I would answer..." Twilight replied, thinking back to all the times Spike specifically mentioned he'd want to be anywhere but in a library when he wanted to relax. "Okay... Question 2: What do you find interesting?"
"Hmm..." he paused, scratching his chin as he looked up and towards the left. "If you think about it, everything is interesting. Even the mundane can be fascinating if you look at it in a different manner."
Again Twilight remembered contradictory events between his past and current self as well as shocking similiarities between he and herself. "Okay, question three:..." She went on asking question after question, realizing that they had nearly everything in common as she felt something inside of her, slowly growing. "Good...Last question... What do you, think about me..?"
"Well you know I've always appreciated you, but now I feel like I know you better, like I'm closer to you."
She blushed lightly, looking at her raised parchment to try and hide it. "But...Do you think I'm...pretty?"
"Twi...I've always thought you were beautiful..."
"...But not like Rarity..."
"No... You have a different kind of beauty, a more...natural one..." Spike replied, causing Twilight to blush harder as he drooped his head. "I just... I never told you because I thought it would ruin our friendship..."
"Aww Spike..." Twilight said and rushed to him with a big hug, embracing him tightly and whispering into his ear. "Actually... I've always though you were, cute too..."
Spike just stood there in shock. Not from the hug but what she said as she embraced him, causing his mind to race. 'Did she just say what I think she did...? Were all those times she said I was cute more than just a "Little brother" cute? Does she care about me that same way I have her for who-knows-how-long?' And after comming back from his thoughts he hugged her back, tightening his grip as much as he could muster while putting his chin into her shoulder. "T-Twilight..."
"Yes Spike?"
"Is that the end of the test?"
Twilight snapped back into reality, realizing that she was enjoying the embrace more than she intended and replied shortly after clearing he throat. "Yes, yes, that was... that was the end of the test."
"So...um...what test are we going to run now?" He asked, slightly dissapointed because he'd wanted to keep hugging her for much longer but, the thought that she might not have had the same intentions had caused him to end it.
*Author's note* Yes, I had originally intended this to be a romance (Preferably clopfic) fiction without much real plot other than the relationships of Spike with the characters of MLP;FiM... So if anyone was dissapointed by the lack of plot, I'm sorry. And if anyone wishes to make a story with an actual plot that uses this idea, please, by all means.
*Editors note* If you write your own version - I (Starkie) want to read it.
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I am disappointed by the lack of a plot and/or the lack of plot. DECIDE!
Still better than the original story. Actual development!
Well... not bad
Ooh im sure their be all kinds of plot when were through
Must admit though a little curious how you went from planing a clopfic to a everyone fic
Really good one, i'm looking forward to the next chapter, tough i feel like this chapter was really short, still very good job!
Very good. Short, but very good. Do not become too rushed. Your pace is fine, but chapter length is short. if that makes sense
495476 that makes perfect sense... but what doesn't make sense is Max commenting the same thing 4 times in a row, minutes appart from one another 495263 495270 495273 495314
twike
woot woot
Im not dissapointed by the lack of plot, I m dissapointed by the lack of words
~850 words, really?
I think i just cloned myself? stoopid lag
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The real difference is this one is good.
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Can't you let me be awful in peace? (Judge me on the other stories I've done)
The real difference is this one is good.480891
I WANT A UPDATE NOW
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I'm gonna be perfectly honest with ya... I can't think of jack sh*t to write... everything I type sounds like garbage, it has massive holes, and most arn't even long enough to be as long as the Twilight chapter... I'm stumped right now and my school work isn't helping
613445 Will ill be glad to give you any ideas if i get one just let me now if you going for comedy or what. but sorry all i can give you is ideas. bad spelling and grammer so sorry. thats all i can do if you want any help that is.
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that'd be great... I'm working towards romance between the ponies and their spikes (each to fall with their own)
614264 ok give me a day. out of the top of my head i was think that at one point the have to go back togther or he dies. since each one is a part of him they took a part of his sanity so slowly he goes crazy each and ever one so that way you may be able to have a fight or two amung the dragons themsleves.
ok i see spike never becoming one again, each pony keeping him for themselves.
skip the rant just read the bottom
man it stories like this that piss me off
great ideas concepts themes with only 2 chapters you got a good momentum going their short but hell decent reads all the same and then the story just stops on a dime causing my over creative imagination to come up with wonderful stories branching plots ect, ect..........and then like a slap to the face i'm reminded one very important fact i cant write stories worth shit oh i can tell stories and i and rant but legitimate writing eludes me and so i sit festering with all this ideas and no way to "put them to paper" i can paint beautiful lands and bring to life heart rending and soul soothing characters in my mind but my hands reject the brush or the pen or the keyboard or any other physical way for these wayward creations of thought to be brought in to our mortal realm....
.....just so you know it took me over an hour and a half to transfer this rant from my head to my screen
....all and all you need to update moar really love the story so far
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I know exactly how you feel... I too often pace about around my house either thinking or ranting about the story I'm reading (often going on these in the middle of sentences) and by the time I say or think about the story, I forget almost everything about what I said/thought...
but the thing is with this story is that I was caught up with the initial idea and had no overlying plot... (I was thinking too much about pairing all the girls with Spike then I should've been thinking about a reasonable story to let it flow on)
and if you happen to read my conversation with "spikethed" in the comments (just 3 above yours I believe) I'll let you know that he has yet to contact me about ANY ideas to help the story along
836228 in truth i read all the above comments and i may or may not be,.......i guess intoxicated is the best word not drugs or alcohol but a mere three hours of sleep total for the past 2 days and i have an idea if you want it just ask and ill pm you its no where near complete but still it could be a start or a spark for your on fire and by the by i wish to say sorry for being and ass lack of sleep is no excuse
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I had my first 2 hours of sleep this week last night... so i know how you feel... and sure, I'd love some insperation...
836320its away let me know what ya think
Is this story dead? please say no/
1536058 To be honest... I wrote it a while ago as a fluke... never really put much thought into the story... just the premiss... However! If I get some free time and finish up the other stories I'm working on (that are desperately in need of work) ... I'll see what I can do...
1536082 Tell me about. It's school for me stupid learning. I just wanted to know because I have about 8 pages of stories that has not been updated in a long time.
1536254 well... I'm trying to finish my college classes, verify my current certification (because I might have to pay another $1000 to get another one of the exact same thing from another place because they simply don't accept the one I currently have), I also have to find work, make payments (when I have the money), fight my depression, filter out my thoughts and ideas (I have about 20 for new Spike romances written down somewhere), get inspiration to write more for my other stories (and no, I will not continue "The Changeling's dragon" because 1. I don't think it will be anywhere near as good as the original one-shot and 2. because I can't really think of much other then "Twilight follows Spike, she finds him and her, they talk/fight, she gets accepted, fairy-tail ending) and a few minor things that aren't really that important...
but other then that... I'm doing good
1536357 dude $1000 foe the same thing? that is BS but then again if it is school they have this hoops and shit and it is like people just $hIT money.
1536383 it's $1000 to take the same basic class I already passed, only in another school and take another test about it... just annoying if you ask me
1536403 It always is but then they say "sorry they dont transfer or sorry rules prevent us form doing this" It is annoying
1536427 I miss the old days when you didn't need to go through all this bullsh*t (not that I lived through any of it)
Good idea, bro!
It is as different shippings in one serie.
You just would have especial attention for the romance, in that, it will make the history best.
Greeeeeeeeeat lance!
Please, continue... and, when out another chapter?
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I will write another chapter when I fulfill my promise to get a job and I have the inspiration to write another chapter
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Ok...
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And not forget
Aren't these two essentially siblings?
I refuse to believe that a peaceful place like Equestria has nuclear weapons.