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She... splits it off cleanly with him, hates him and wallows in self-pity for a while, thinks of what she could've done better, grows as a person, and moves on?
No? *snaps* Darn.
6152175 If it were that easy, would it be much of a deconstruction?
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M-maybe?
... No...
I'm surprised that her decon is not straight up "you are not very loyal" in the way the other characters are all struggling with living up to their virtue. I guess her frequent absence from Soarin is sort of like that, and her old actions to Scootaloo were... hm.
Yeah...feared this would happen. If this follows Madoka's rules, then RD will beocme a big ass Nightmare...
Everyone complains about Twilight yet rarity is still my only hated character based on actions and personality and poor rainbow.
Poor Dash maybe Pinkie will come and try to comfort her in her time of need since she knows what is going to happen?
I have seen numerous times from RD saying that Scootaloo can't ever find out that she's her actual mother, and to be honest, I can understand somewhat what is going on--the whole abandonment issue. That is gonna completely tear her apart, if it hasn't started already. I still think that at some point that she has to fess up. And yes, there is gonna be pain and anger, but I think surprisingly Scootaloo will understand. Surprisingly, Scootaloo is probably the most mature of the three CMCs; maybe that's because she had her life in an orphanage and she had to grow up pretty quick. (But still, she's a seven-year-old filly.)
Seriously, with all that heavy mental baggage, and recently becoming an Element (meaning she has a horn as well as her wings), it's truly astonishing that she hadn't even succumbed to any major Nightmares.....yet. And now to even twist the knife a little bit, she witnesses her new boyfriend in a way with another girl that isn't anything at all sweet and chaste.
Hell, even Twilight knows, at least that Dash is a mother of a daughter in there right now. And I'm sure that the others will handle that soon. I really hope that Scoots is finally able to come home to where she really is--with her mother.
So, yeah, who else immediately knew what was going to be the ending of this chapter?
Okay, okay...
Here.
You can have my upvote.
I am SO looking forward to future updates.
So pinkamena is like the wise eccentric character who guides people in the right direction but lets them find their own way. your role for her confuses me greatly and the last of pinkamena is depressing.
Listen to Rainbow Dash, Twilight. We all know that you have feelings for Spike, you just need to get out of your comfort zone and really tell Spike that you like him as a lover, not just as her best friend, because Rarity knows exactly what she wants in Spike, and the fact that she's fucked Spike at least twice tells you that you need to stake a claim A.S.A.P, otherwise you will be kicking yourself letting your best friend and crush go to another mare that is willing to say that she does love him (whether Rarity really means it or just wants to take Spike from Twilight is to be determined...)
Remember, fortune favors the bold, Twilight.
6518815 Glad you like it. Just so you know, I do plan on continuing this story soon.
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YESSSSS!!!!
The fact that this Rainbow Dash was pregnant with this Scootaloo for only 9 months might be part of why this Scootaloo is under developed in the wing department.
In fact, check out: http://www.answers.com/Q/How_long_is_a_pony_pregnant for how long a pony is usually pregnant.
Oh Dash....
As the Element of Loyalty, being betrayed by somepony, especially if that somepony is the one what you love, and thought loved you back, has got to be the worst feeling in the world.