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Well overall it seems interesting, the fight scene in the first chapter seemed a bit off, like it could have been done better but it was still awesome.
I see some similarities with my fic, but they're so minor that I don't care. I love what you've done so far and I'm looking forward to more.
4917439 Fight scenes are something I have trouble with.
This kinda reminds me of a fan comic by Deviant Art user maurzo. The story is humanized and wayyyy different, but the Mane Six are magical girls. It's really cool and you should check it out.
4917818 I think I know about that. If it's the same thing then I'm currently following it. I guess I can see the similarities now, but give it a few chapters... this story is going to be... interesting.
Hmmm... I notice a distinct lack of Pinkie so far. I wonder when she'll turn up?
...baseline Pinkie would really alienate this Twilight.
4918888 Pinkie Pie will show up, but I have a plan for that...
Whatever you are thinking, it's not it.
The Madoka ending theme started up in my head as soon as I got to the Nightmare fight, which is a good thing.
It'll be interesting to see where you go with this. I'm surprised you didn't have Sunset as the Alpha Bitch of Twi's class, given that Trixie wasn't canonically an Academy mage: but that's what the Artistic Licence you've got is for.
Thar's a shit storm a'brewin, and it's called sparity.
(In the actual story, I'm a sparity lover all the way, but I can just see the conflict waiting ahead)
just found this story. on welcome to ponyville. i like the idea so far. ^_^ will keep reading. :)
Typical Rarity....
Um, excuse me?