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Another great chapter. I just fear for what pinkanema might do with the others.
Also, I would like to know how powerful Spike would be if all alicorns gave him a bit of magic.
So far, this has been a decent story, but without knowing exactly how and why you're "deconstructing" the larger world, a decent story is really all this is. Some author's notes at the end of the chapters explaining the how and why of it would make this a lot more interesting.
4975043 I sort of want the deconstructions to not be spelled out though. My original intention was for this story to make readers think about the deconstructions. I'm hitting the end of the first arc, so I might put down a few at the end.
4976190 I can understand that idea. The problem, to be quite blunt, is that there's really nothing about the story in and of itself that separates it from the rest of alternate universe stories that get posted to fimfiction. It blends into the crowd so well that it's tough to see what you're deconstructing, or how you're deconstructing it. This is made worse by the fact that symbolism is an inherently subjective thing, and different people will get different things out of the same scene.
So laying out some of your thought process and/or some of the actual deconstructions you've written into the story could give your readers a place to start, at the very least. There's no need to go into great detail and reveal everything, just give us a starting point.
Yay for Twilight!