Interesting concept, will continue to read future chapters.

There are not enough stories with Mommy Celestia.

Here is a Picture I found on Furaffinity: Big filly Twilight's stroll

And again you are in trouble, NightMist... *sigh* what have you did now, that Celestia sends the Viking Ponies after you?

4773905 Well um, I sort of, you know.

4773933 I think your CutieMark will be a Tornado for all the trouble you cause, little brother.

Faithful student, not fateful.
Also, there are too many wells.

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4773951 I'm not sure, I mean it would make sense, but, I don't know. We'll never know until it happens.

Pretty good 1st chapter gonna track this one

4774047 It's alright, pal, we all make mistakes. Do you have a proofreader?

4774396 Um, no.

4773905 ewwww

4774742 What exactly?

4774407 I suggest getting one.

i really like it hope to read more soon

This gun b good, i feel it.
faved

4774980 Objection! I have tried that and no pony will offer any help.

4775604 I'll let you and the other readers decide that. It makes it more interesting when you don't know the origins.

4775410 Is that so? My apologies. I suppose you aren't in deathly need of a proofreader, as your spelling and grammar is good as is. I will continue to point out errors if I see them, though.

4775684 Well, Okay, most I can give at this time is, even though Celestia is the one who controls the sun, Solaria was her predecessor, however, she was also given the talent of changing the seasons as well, since nothing was stated that the alicorns we know of control the seasons. I know the pegasi actually create snowflakes in Cloudsdale, but, they can't account for leaves changing in autumn, and I don't think it said anywhere that unicorns or earth ponies are the ones who control that. So yeah, Solaria's the one who control's the seasons. Artemis, their father is the one who makes some shooting stars appear and gives of the aurora's ponies see on occasions. He of course was Luna's predecessor before she became Princess of the night and controlled the moon and stars.

4775822 Thank you kind sir.

this story is amazing X3

if Celestia did the spell, i don't think she will ever want to undo it as what mother would give up there daughter?

4775938 Awww, do I have to?

This is a very nice story and I hope it turns out to be very good.

Warning: warning ignored, loves stories where one of the royal sisters is a mother of some sort.

I look forward to your next chapters But based on your cover art you have already decided it would be twilight that will be regressed to a foal for Celestia to "mother" awesome I look forward to how that unfolds

I like the concept , wrote more

4779922 Well I kind of figured everyone would catch on. I mean, who better to be her foal?

4777005 Okay, but do I have to put it in this chapter?

4773905 That picture is rather disturbing

"Yes, of course, a few other spells would have to be cast so that no pony would start to worry about the pony in question. We would have to make sure that the family and friends of the said pony would not even notice he or she is gone. A temporary and very complicated memory pull if you will. They'd remember everything that has happened, but the presence of said pony in those memories will be null and void. Another spell that would come into play is we would have to make everypony think that the pony you are taking care of is infact your own foal, so no one will have any suspicions of your actions," Solaria said.

"Your making this sound a tad bit dark mother," Celestia said.

a tab bit dark? how bout fucking tyrannical? what the fuck why is this the plot the story takes?.....

This needs a lot of work. Spelling errors, grammatical errors, and very basic ones at that. You should at least read back what you've typed, to yourself, before posting it. Or make friends with an editor. Also, 4781991 is entirely correct. That is a hard, sudden dark turn into tyranny, kidnapping, memory-wiping, and many other dark and starkly evil actions. You really should think this through a bit more.

You have plenty of room to grow, just be careful what this grows into.

~Aegis Shield

4782022 and the fic has a fucking comedy tag too , no hint at sarcasm for any of this though.....

4781991 I can see where you say it's tyrannical, but I don't intend to let it be like that. I'm just throwing things for a loop right now. Just wait.

4782473 is that so......

4782495 Eeyup.

4781126 very true I can't wait for your next chapter

Okay, where did her parents came from? and advice to make it slightly less dark on Celestia. have something happen to Twilight's family that would make the age regression be a kindness.

4782901 Still a little too dark there, don't worry, I have something that will make this all the less dark.

4783624 I guess more like making Celestia less dark.

Like the story for what its worth, really I would have no problem with this if you did simply put the dark tag on it. Might even make for some interesting moral conflicts down the line.
But its up to you man, will keep reading regardless.

Awesome story you created :D I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

I Can't Bucking Wait!!!

i will read the chapters that come out, but i'll wait before i favorite this.

also, were celestia and luna's parents physically there, or just in spirit?

4793067 Physically there.

4793108 that makes things... strange

4793134 Strange? Why?

4793194 i dunno. it just feels weird to me. i mean, faust being around as celly and lulu's mother in your other fic (and thus becoming our grandmother) seems to fit. but, for this fic, it just feels off to me for some reason.

though, that's just how i feel. doesn't mean the story will be bad, in fact, i see this heading in a good direction. i just feel a little weird with their parents being there for some reason.

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4793194 Watch Vid
It Goes With The "Strange" Comment

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