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Great to have a chapter up. Looking forward for more chapters .
Ok one thing its telekinesis not telepathy telepathy is the ablity to read minds not move objects
Noted. Edited. Thank you for pointing that out.
5028324 If he talks; they are far less likely to kill him as a potential dangerous animal, or leave him in a cage like an attraction at a zoo.
If he doesn't talk; all that does is make them less likely to trust him, and thus be courteous towards him, when they inevitably find out. Yes he would figure out more information about them, but it also increases the chances of them misunderstanding his intentions and it all going to hell.
And someone finally understands it. Thank you, I've really been trying to create an actual story, not just some mindless one-shot with little plot or story.
T-this is beautiful!
At least he didn't let Celestia walk all over him in that interrogation. But seriously fuck her bitchass guards. They started this by immediately throwing up their spears. They wanted to kick his ass from the very beginning.
5023441 You know you need to hit the reply button, or otherwise whoever you're talking to (Big hint: There's a your/you're mistake in there. edit:Of course, I could always be thinking of another story. They're starting to blend together at this point.) won't receive the message.
5058571 Understood. Still a bit new to this site.
I saw that a new chapter had been posted, and when I try to read it I need a password... Is the chapter not proofread yet?
Either you're going for some interesting symbolism, or you've got a translation error. Celestial bodies are not usually referred to as awake or asleep.
I would recommend completely rephrasing this sentence to something like, "It was night-time, a full moon hung high in the sky, shining down on the little stone fixture." (or low in the sky; it's up to you)
poor bastard!
At least you didn't just sit there and take shit from Celestia.
5606643 True story. That may very well the bit that makes me follow this story.