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After that little stunt Celestia would lose all cooperation from me. Who ever authorized that mind fuckery, probably Celestia, would have given me every reason to now see them as enemies and nothing more.
And after they had built up all that trust, however little of it, and then tossed it right out the window with that one act.
Now what I would find truly interesting would be if our little psycho had dones this of her own accord.
Now that I've read the fifth chapter, I can comment more than just grammar.
Maverick was acting illogically during parts of his arrival, but I forgive that because humans aren't perfectly logical creatures. Canon characters have acted broadly within character, although I do wonder whether Equestria Girls fits in your canon, since that would give Twilight a basic but somewhat flawed perspective on Maverick as a creature.
Overall, I like where this is headed; keep it up, but consider getting an editor and/or proof reader.
I hope the surgery goes well
I can see this blowing up on the ponys. they have a lot of unknowns about him. If his powers tern out to be devastating, he wood be a prime candidate for one of the villeins to use him, if they can git him on there side. On the good side, they are not cutting him open to see how he works so keep up the good job you are doing on this story. I hope to see a new chapter and I hope your operation go's well.
Dragonfox
POOR BASTARD! . . . more please
Another human is being dominated by ponies story. -,-
Unless his powers will help him greatly.
This is fun.
That's right, Silver Star, torment the young, scared, extra-planetary creature with unknown, uncontrolled power coursing through him. That can't backfire at ALL!
5100049 Why are you every where i go man
5125459 Because i read almost 1000 fic story.
no kidding, you will meet a stupid kid just see alot comment.
Like...(I forgot his stupid name) * So great.*
If he does have any powers I hope he learns them soon. I hate it when the human is a pony's bitch
you people always write such nice humans. Id have killed her. over the table, grip horn and jaw, apply quick powerful torsion and fear-o-vision stops. of course then you have other problems but one thing at a time.