Derpy Hooves hasn’t had much luck in life. Aside from having a bad set of eyes and being a poor flier, she isn’t exactly the best at working her job. All she wants is love, a stallion who will accept and love her for being the pony she is.
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it's still a great story so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapters, to see if derpy story ends well.
Oh yesyesues I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
This story sort of reminds me of the TV show Arrow, in that it keeps going back several years and filling out backstory. I somewhat expect Derpy to start reminiscing about the time she was trapped on that island. That would explain what happened to her father.
There is a definite contrast between how AJ treats Derpy versus how Thunderlane treats her. AJ is sincere, and Thunderlane seems to only be nice to get his way. Of course, that could be me just reading too deeply into things, as I don't know how this will play out (and I don't like Thunderlane in this incarnation). The addition of Pinkie to this chapter was interesting, and I can only guess how she will fit into the story. She could just be a background character, but I could see her taking a more active role, especially considering the other story that this is a sort-of sequel to.
All in all, I'm really enjoying reading this and look forward to more!
Why is the like:dislike ratio so bad on this story? Are people just down voting because of the diapers?
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Dunno
That's one possibility. Could be the tone difference between this story and its pseudo-prequel, or maybe the way I've constructed the story/writing style. Anything, really. It's a lil frustrating, but one can't control how his stories are going to be received.
Still gonna write it, lol. If people have constructive criticism, I always welcome it
Peace