Derpy Hooves hasn’t had much luck in life. Aside from having a bad set of eyes and being a poor flier, she isn’t exactly the best at working her job. All she wants is love, a stallion who will accept and love her for being the pony she is.
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This will probably come out a bit rambling, but here goes.
I admit, i started reading this story to satisfy my diaper fetish. I'm trying to overcome it, but that's a different conversation. I feel very little guilt reading this, since the diapers are, for lack of a better word, accessories to the real story. You have woven a story of love, love of those ago are weaker than most. I see true love, support, and compassion here. I'm trying to become a nurse, and part ofthe process to become a good nurse, or even parent, is to love and comfort people, even when they are covered in filth and body fluids. You've captured that here.
Even when i overcome my deviant fetishes and gain a healthy romantic and sexual relationship, i won't forget this. I look forward to any updates you have, though I'll skip any smut you put in.
Your characters are true, and their actions seem to flow from their personalities, not forced into roles like puppets.
Signing off now, got to wake up early tomorrow. Thank you, and forgive my ramblings.
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Thank you very much, that means a lot to read from someone who's enjoying my story.
I totally understand why you're ready to skip the smut, as this story contains a tiny bit of graphic descriptions of... things, but like the diapers it's really not the focus. I consider it all just small elements.
Your words really don't really seem to ramble to me, as it has a theme, and part of that theme shows me you've been able to relate to a few things in this story and are having fun while reading it. That is quite the compliment, so thanks again.
Peace
Oh, wow! This chapter definitely lives up to its name in bringing a lot of perspective to the world you have created with AJ and RD by, if I guess right, making this story a part of the tales in which you've written of AJ and RD prior. (Points in how you've written alternate scenarios for some of these as it truly shows how slight changes in a situation can make big differences)
The interactions of all the characters really fleshes out a lot of detail without the need to write thousands of words / multiple chapters. Dashie is looking into Thunderlane, has known about Thunderlane's 'player' antics, and also of how sensitive Derpy is given what likely happenedto her. Applejack is just going with all she has learned of Derpy and her family from growing up with them in the house.
I'm pretty sure Granny Smith and Big mac knew of Derpy's incontinence and I give props to Big Mac for handling what happened during that trip back to the house. It definitely doesn't sound easy and some folks really get rowdy when their drunk. It's a good thing Derpy isn't normally a drinker or I'd guess loads of serious interventions would need done.
Granny Smith's discovery of AJ's 'stash' was well handled. It also explains how Derpy ended up in what she did when she was brought back to the house. She has her protection at home but likely would have no diapers lying around the Apples' in an event of a sleepover.
You write Derpy's emotions very well. Applejack has learned how to be there for Derpy despite her limitations. She doesn't treat Derpy any less than she'd treat any other pony. Moreover is how she isn't taking out her frustration of being cheated out of her 'special night' out on Derpy for what happened. She's being a true friend and realizing how she needs to be there to help the bubbly mare through her trauma.
What I'm liking in recent chapters is how AJ and other ponies learned how to help Derpy help herself. They 'meet her in the middle' by helping her become as independent as she can be while also not getting annoyed as a result of what her condition causes her to not get as well as everyday ponies. She's a 'High Functioning' pony thanks to her friends and will continue to be since theApples and others know her as a pony instead of as a cripple.
Keep up the great work. Love what you did and am looking forward to more. :)