A very nice addition to this epic story. Definitely lots of visuals with feeling the emotions Derpy experienced with her first trips into Ponyville, learning of her baby sister's magic, and awkwardly talking with mom about 'Coming Clean'.

I'm getting some thoughts on the sort of foal may be coming to join the family next. Ms. Hooves has a history of having children who have some slight variations to what one would consider, 'normal'. Derpy with her eyes and learning disability, Dinky in being late in using Unicorn magic, and what may come with the birth of her next foal.

I like how you tied in AJ going off to, I believe, "Camp Friendship" over the summer. I can definitely see those times as those she'd have gotten to know Rara.

Your stories always are great in how you can truly get to be with the characters. You get to know them from the inside out. Certainly eager for what may come next. :)

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Thank you for the kind words, pardner.

I won't spoil the coming chapters, but I will say the connections you've made would work in elements of the series... which is pretty awesome in any story ^^

Thanks again and take care!