Derpy Hooves hasn’t had much luck in life. Aside from having a bad set of eyes and being a poor flier, she isn’t exactly the best at working her job. All she wants is love, a stallion who will accept and love her for being the pony she is.
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Too long? No way, I got really into it and was actually surprised when it was over so quickly. A great addition to a great story.
Saw some spelling errors and type-os. I'll reread it later and send you the errors I spot so you can fix 'em when you have thyme. See what I did there.
I have to say, this story keeps me guessing. I am generally pretty good at seeing where something is going, but I keep going "ah, so that's his play" and then immediately being like "oh, maybe not." That just makes me look forward to the next chapters even more.
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Thanks for the kind words. Glad to hear others are getting into it
While I appreciate the spoiler bar, Derpy isn't an orphan here, she's just the child of a single parent. I can see how that could be potentially depressing, especially with the implications and the bits of bad luck and misfortune being thrown her way.
However, to be fair, there have been plenty of periods of elation in the story, so I can promise everything in balance.
Thanks again for the interest. Peace