Back at the castle there sat a little lavender foal unicorn, gazing up at Princess Celestia. She still smelled horrible, desperately needed a bath, but was not able to do to the water being off. All the guards were running to find the source of the problem and the maids were trying to get the water back on. Luna having awoken upon leaving was giggling at the servants trying every tap in the every room that had one, and there are a lot of taps and rooms.
Luna was getting bored of watching the servants scurry around. So she looked up at her ‘mom’ and said, "Woona want up!" She had her hooves in the air. She could not fly due to her small wings being under developed. Celestia was just glancing around at the activity that was going on. She felt a tug on her leg and looked down at Luna.
"Not right now, we have to give Twily a bath. And you need one too, little miss play in the mud at the gate." She replied. Then she thought of the mud, you need water and dirt to make it, so that must be the problem. They have a leak. "Guard! There is a puddle of mud by the front gate that is where our problem lies." The guard galloped off to fix the problem. In a matter of moments the water was running again. "Ah there we go." Twilight looked up at her and smiled.
She uttered,"I wove you mama!" Twilight was in high spirits at the words she had spoken. Celestia features clearly were shocked at that statement. She had a feeling in her chest she never had before. She felt the love of a mother for her foal.
"I love you to hun." She nuzzled her softly, but was worried they had lost her smart mind too. She would have to find a cure if this doesn't go away on its own. The bath had filled up by the time she looked back up. She tested the water to make sure it was not to hot or too cold. She got in with Luna after. She got Twilight in her aura to bring her in but the second one of her hoofs touched the water she started to struggle. Luna saw this and pronounced," its fun Twiwight! See." She then picked up a blue toy boat that was on the edge of the tub and held it out to Twilight. "I wove you Twiwight. I won't wet any bad ting hewt you. I pwomiss."
Twilight stared at it then at Luna then to Celestia, and let her put her in the bathtub. She then grabbed the boat from the water and pushed it to Luna so they pushed it back at forth. "I wove you to Woona!" The fillies even made a little game with the rubber duck.
Then they continued with the bath till them both showed no signs of smell or filth. They then got dried off with a fluffy towel then went out of the bathroom and back into the nursery made for them ahead of their mommy.
When Celestia walked in she saw a stunning night sky painted on the walls, a changing table, two high chairs, and a little round table with a few vibrant stools, a toy chest, some blankets on the floor, and two cribs. One crib was night blue with Luna's cutie mark. And the other that was purple with Twilight’s cutie mark. She walked over to the table and went into a cubby for the supplies then she took out the cream, wipes, powder, and of course the diapers.
Celestia then lifted up Twilight onto the changing table; the sun princess then gave a small giggle as she watched Luna try to peer over the edge. So she simply grabbed a colorful stool from the table with her golden magic and let Luna climb up on it so she could see.
Twilight observed her with her cute little purple eyes as Celestia carefully set her onto her back. She then opened the diaper up. “Up ya go”, sang Celestia in a cheery voice that made little Twily laugh as she slipped the diaper under Twilight’s flanks. She then wiped away any mess with a cold wipe. The purple filly jumped a bit but Celestia calmly held her down. “Don’t worry, It’s just cold”, cooed the bringer of the day as the filly settled down.
She then spread the cream that prevented rashes over Twi’s privates but the white mare didn’t feel embarrassed, after all, she had done this a few times to Luna back in the old days and besides, they were babies. So she soon powdered her and wrapped up the diaper.
She then chuckled a little at the starry diaper crinkling as her pupil waddled around on the floor. Celestia then repeated the process with Luna who was a little fussy but otherwise fine. She swore she saw both of them blush at one point or another; maybe they were a little aware about that. Perhaps she could buy them some onesies or some kind of pajamas because they kind of looked a little chilly.
She finally took a good look around the room and marveled at how fast the maids had put together this little nursery. "They sure know how to put a room together." Celestia said. She then stared down at the two little foals who were toddling around on the floor. So the sunny alicorn took out some random toys from the chest and placed them on a fuzzy blanket for them to play with while she was gone.
She then went into the small closet to grab two stuffed animals one a doll Twilight loved when she was really little, her Smarty Pants then the second one was Ursa Minor for Luna, and she always liked the starry bears.
By the time she came back over to them they had fallen asleep on the fuzzy blanket in a pile together near the toys. Twilight was suckling her hoof, it was the cutest thing. And Luna was spread out like rug. Celestia laughed at that. "Just like old times..."
She gently picked them up in her magic and put them in their respective cribs, also pulling their cute blankets over each of them. She placed the dolls in also; they automatically snuggled up to them. "Good night you guys. I love you.” She then shut the door and strolled out. She was on her way to the library to find a cure for them. This is going to be a very long night.
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i like it and can you please make it so Celestia dose not find a cure for Luna and Twilight so they can grow up again as Celestia daughters
4581086 ok and can you reply to my first comment
4581102 yah I'm doing that. That was my plan to make twilight think she is her daughter. And would you like a sneek peek on why she did not send spike a letter?
4581121 ok and yes i would like a sneek peek on why she did not send spike a letter
4581118 I did that in the first one but I will again. I will reword it. Yes I will not let her find a cure. I was going to make Twily think she is her mom.
And spike is not real. I'm mean he is to twilight but that's when she gets old enough for a imaginary friend. Hence the AU tag.
4581161 ok and what about Luna dose she still think of Celestia and Twilight the same where as before
4581161 why haven't you reply to my latest comment on this story and sorry that i reply to your comment two times right now i hope you can forgive me for that
4581297 I tried I'm having WiFi troubles. and I don't have a computer only a tablet. As for you question Luna thinks Twilight is her sister and I might make celestia go a little evil by making Luna think she's her daughter but idk.
4581365 i am sorry to hear that and ok and please make celestia go a little evil by making Luna think she's her daughter i would like that
4581374 OK besides I like that kind of stuff.
4581387 ok and what kind of stuff would that be you like
4581086 okay thank you so much and just got done reading it and LOVED IT
4581390 regression in twilight in Luna. I may even make celestia make twilight stop talking altogether. And just give her a bay mind with no thought comprehension to English. But still idk.
Celestia: oh what do we have here?
Me:nothing!
Celestia: Well OK. But if you going to write this make me a tad bit more motherly after I do this to them.
Me: O-Okay. See ya! *runs into my and hides under my bed*
4581408 i men't to ok and please don't have celestia make twilight stop talking altogether. And just give her a bay mind with no thought comprehension to English. and i am sorry i delete 2 comments of mine on this chapter i hope you can forgive for that again
4581514 its fine I'm not an angry kind of girl. And I will try to make it how you want it. But it depends on what other people think.
4581640 ok and please try to have all of the stuff that i want to happen in this story that we talk about in chapter 2
THE CUTENESS, IT BURNS!!!!!! But in all seriousness dude great story. A few minor spelling mistakes, but overall awesome.
4582172 thanks and yah I did this on a tablet and still am. But any thanks. And PS, I'm a girl that is 14 and got an A on itfrom my old 9th grade teacher. I'm almost in 10th. You guy feed back helps me improve this story. so thanks one again.
Thanks and I did this on a tablet so yah a few errors. And PS I'm a dudet. Not a dude. Lol.
So cute please more
4582507 in a week or two.
4579619 to me it would make somewhat more sense if her prolonged stay in/on the moon caused time there to be altered (like an exaggerated version of how after a long time in space astronauts haven't aged as much physically) and when twilight blasted Nightmare Moon she was reverted to how she would have been. Or something like that.
And also when Twilight channelled her magic into Luna/Nightmare Moon it created a magical connection between them
Fast Pony Runner i am sorry i delete another comment on this story again and can you reply to my resent comment i put on your page today or send me a private message back so we can there too if you want to
OMG! ITS SO CUTE IM GONNA DIE!
Nyeh, it feels like you skipped some chapters there (sudden character development) and of course, the grammar. Almost pointless pointing that out as you are looking for editors already.
Feels like you skipped a few chapters here. I expected her to arrive and the guards to be shocked by what the saw.
While it is a little fast, I understand twilight thinking of celestia as her mother. Though celestia should've worried not so much about twilight's mind, but about her parents at that point
4581408 NO, NO you will NOT do that. You can have Twilight and Luna stay as foals and make them think Celestia is their mother, BUT you will NOT butcher their personallity's; keep Twilight Sparkle smart and Luna's royal way of speaking.
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There FOALS! what does it matter! they have not said a word and Foals are Not very smart even twily