"Be back in a dash!" and then she flew out leaving a colorful trail behind her. She was on her way to the palace in Canterlot, where the princesses were at, along with Twilight. She was soaring over the Everfree forest right now. She spotted an outraged timber wolf pack hunting down a desperately hopping Angel bunny. "I wonder what he did to deserve that..."
Soon she got bored imagining how Fluttershy’s pet had gotten himself in such a dangerous situation. The multihued pegasus dived down and scooped up the critter, even if he wasn’t her favorite she didn’t want to see one of her best friends crying because of his stupid actions. Angel simply gave her a tiny pat as thanks then started thumping his long pale foot and pointing at the cottage. So she just let him off at his home and took to the air. Soon she was about half way near her destination. Rainbow Dash’s mind started to wander.
"What would happen if I were to throw a cloud at a dragon? Would it feel it and get super angry or would it just evaporate on impact? I wonder what is going on at the party their setting up. I will figure it out when I get back I guess. Except, what about Twilight and Princess Luna?” We haven’t seen them since the summer sun celebration. And that was a day to remember, after the awesome rainbow the elements made and took down Nightmare Moon! I'm almost to the castle just got to slow down my speed”. She tried to decrease her pace to get to the gates but crashed into the metal entrance instead. Her vision was foggy and she shook her head to clear it.
“May I help you Miss?” inquired a deep but polite voice. She glanced up and saw it was a stallion. His attire was a fine suit. She was surprised that it was not a big bulky guard yet he was thin but still well built none the less. She guessed he was a butler by the way he held himself. Maybe Rarity would like to date this guy since he didn’t seem like another Prince Blueblood. He had a spotless white coat, charcoal hair, and had a star with a circle cutie mark. "Hello?” He then proceeded to try again, “Miss?”
Rainbow Dash looked up at him and answered, "Yeah, can you help me up? I have an important letter to give the princess." She held out her hoof to him.
"Sure,” he replied as he assisted her up onto her hooves. "But I don't know about your princess, frankly I don't know about this country. I seem to have lost my young master. Have you seen him? ” He asked.”Normally I wouldn't need some pony’s help but I can't seem to locate him. By the way my name is Sebastian"
"Thanks, and no I haven't seen him anywhere. Or any little foal for that matter. I can do a fly by if you want me to. Oh and my name is Rainbow Dash! I am the fastest flyer in Equestria." She said as she was getting ready to take wing.
"Thank you Miss. Dash. Good luck at finding him.", and with that she ascended off into the blue. She decided to search the grounds before she went into the building itself. She flew by a window and saw something she could not un-see, Celestia and the foals. The purple one was straining her face like the dark blue one.
But nothing happened then they screamed," WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY HORN?!" Then Princess Celestia spoke and lit up her own ivory horn again. That is when Dash fell out of the sky. She landed with an 'oof' then heard a small kid say," Sebastian! Where are you? Come and get me now that is an order!" Suddenly there was a ruffling noise then a familiar stallion’s voice uttered, "Oh there you are!" Rainbow was curious and walked briskly over to the voices, not wondering nor caring how she didn’t break any bones.
"Is this your young master?” she asked as she looked down at the kid she was sure she had heard moments before. He was a tan colt with a similar black mane to the stallion but a shade lighter. And he had an eye patch on. "How did you find him before I did?"
"Sebastian, who is this mare,” questioned the colt. "Oh it’s no pony young master." Then he turned to Dash to answer her, “I am simply one hell of a butler" then he trotted off with the colt on his back. Now that Rainbow calmed down from her little fall of losing the quest, she remembered what she had just seen moments ago.
"Oh gosh I got to get out of here!" Then she rushed off for Ponyville. But first she left the letter to a nearby guard; she soon got there and in record time too. She grabbed the banner and hung it. RD did some additional stuff with the others watching.
Then there was a light and she was gone. She speeded out of Sugar Cube Corner and to her home. She hid for what seemed like hours. When she eventually got out of hiding it was dark. And the party was over. She finally steeled herself and knew she had to tell the girls. She was getting ready to leave but was stopped by a magical aura. Her memory was wiped of what she saw and then she was put into a deep peaceful sleep.
"We can't have you ruin my fun." Then Rainbow was placed on her soft cloud bed and the figure disappeared into the night..
... wow celestia is good putting 2 and 2 together and did you put in black butler
yay black butler!
Oh god, this. Was. AWFUL! And I'm not only talking about the tons of grammatical errors. Half the time I didn't even know what the buck is going on. Why am I even still reading this? And get yourself a proofreader or an editor!
a lil confusing.
4756383 yup!
4756425 Im trying but the last person didn't get in torch with me. I working on getting it fixed.
we got a intro of black butler character's namely Sebastian and Ciel, and something weird that made no sense. Do you think maybe you could explain why Twi and Luna decided to prank Celestia of for that matter give us a little more description from either's point of view. As right now you've totally swapped viewpoints and I have no idea why as since Rainbow's going to forget there was no actual progress to the story other than a short blurb introducing a possible crossover.
if you need an editor/co-writer i'd be willing to help.
as for this chapter, it was okay, though that butler seemed rather rude, not even thanking dash for trying to help after he'd found the colt, as well as telling the colt she was no one.
as for who cast that spell on dash, my first thoughts are celestia, but how did she know dash had seen her? Did one of the girls say to the princess that dash had been acting odd and she took that as a sign that dash knew what she'd done?
4756849 YES! Please!!! help me!!! PM so we can have a discussion about this and future chapters! Thank you thank you thank you!
I also am willing to help you as an editor if you need one. As for what I wish to see, heartwarming motherly Celestia of course! Also more baby stuff like onesies for each of them, maybe lullabys, high chairs, adorable bath time, putting their hair up in braids,brushing them and stuff, just make it as cute as you can imagine! (Ps: If I went too far listing stuff, sorry but cuteness is not resistible :P) Also maybe a bit longer but nice work on the cliffhanger. So far good job, keep it up! (Nice touch on the Black Butler)
4758217 thanks so much. And yes I would like for you to be and editor. The great Autum Breeze is helping me wright now. But I would still need an editor. Pm so we can talk more.
Yay black butler! Will there be any other anime appearing in this?
4756849 it's Sebastian. Don't question sebby c;
Well someones a sociopath.
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IM LIKE 99.99% SURE THAT WAS CELETIA!!!
rarity hasn't been to a galloping gala yet or met blueblood
I am simply on hell of a butler you cheeky bastard
black butler references :D